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Post by Cary on Oct 2, 2004 21:14:18 GMT -5
I now must say, my best friend Vee is truely sadistic. It is rather creepy... While reading my fanfic, she laughed through the entire bunny and Won scenes.
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Post by Butterscotch on Oct 2, 2004 21:15:27 GMT -5
She laughed?! What was so funny?
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Post by Cary on Oct 2, 2004 21:17:26 GMT -5
She thought it was hilarious that the bunny was being killed, same with Won.
Her comment: That was so hilarious, Won got just what he deserved! Hope Popuri is next!
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Post by Butterscotch on Oct 2, 2004 21:18:50 GMT -5
Yeah, Won did deserve it. But it wasn't funny!
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Post by Cary on Oct 2, 2004 21:20:03 GMT -5
Still didn't stop her from laughing the whole time. I know, I was there while she read it.
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Post by Butterscotch on Oct 2, 2004 21:25:37 GMT -5
That's ....weird....
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Post by Cary on Oct 2, 2004 21:33:38 GMT -5
Yes... It is... I never knew she was so delightfully evil...
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Post by Butterscotch on Oct 2, 2004 21:34:53 GMT -5
Soo...when's the next part?
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Post by Cary on Oct 2, 2004 21:37:32 GMT -5
I'm sort of hoping I'd think up something better... The next chapter isn't very good IMO. For the most Jack is little more than a cameo. And that's a small part when your chapters are as small as mine!
"My name is Retribution!" Jack called out as he swung around his hammer hard at Won's head. He heard the sound of Wons skull cracking and several teeth been shattered!"
YES! YES! YES! YES! The annoying cheepskate is dead! YAY!
Now if you could only take care of the most annoying person "popori!"! {LOL}
That's Vee's review on Fanfiction.net...
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Post by Butterscotch on Oct 2, 2004 21:40:43 GMT -5
Okay, I'll take quality over quantity!
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Post by Cary on Oct 2, 2004 21:44:47 GMT -5
It's so frustrating... But I did figure out to include Harris as a major character which definately improves the chapter.
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Post by Butterscotch on Oct 2, 2004 21:56:43 GMT -5
Harris didn't fare too well when I put him in the Return.
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Post by Cary on Oct 2, 2004 22:05:05 GMT -5
*sniff* poor Harris... I haven't decided if he will die or not... But he makes a great supporting character. I don't know why I always thought he was the mailman
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Post by Butterscotch on Oct 2, 2004 22:06:00 GMT -5
He was the mailman in HM64.
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Post by Cary on Oct 2, 2004 22:07:25 GMT -5
That explains why!
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