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Post by Mamma Mia on Apr 27, 2006 12:12:46 GMT -5
 i think that Jack flirting with all of the girls.
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Post by karenfreak on Apr 28, 2006 2:02:07 GMT -5
Oh well as only 1 person has answered i think that it has to be Jack flirting with all the girls. Chapter 3 : a broken heart The day after the incident she went to Jacks house, she found out how true love felt. She loved Jack to peices but he couldnt know. She skipped to Jacks house with a chocolate pizza (well that was what it was supposed to be) and knocked on the door. There was no one in so she ran to Anns inn to give it too her instead, Jack was there giving Ann a flower, Jack then came up to her she left gobsmacked. She went up to the hotsprings and found herself sobbing. Rick came up with Tim and Tim (kind as he was) asked Karen what the matter was, Karen didn't reply. she just carried on sobbing. Rick asked what the matter was, Karen smiled a little bit because at least a few boys cared about her... Hope you liked do you think that 1) Jack should flirt with more girls 2) Karen falls for Rick |
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Post by EYO on Apr 28, 2006 13:42:29 GMT -5
I love it when Karen and Jack get into relationships, but I want him to flirt some more. *damn me and my curiosity!!!*
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Post by karenfreak on Apr 28, 2006 15:50:22 GMT -5
I take it you like Karen Jack
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Post by karenfreak on Apr 30, 2006 14:58:10 GMT -5
:-*no more?
Chapter 4: broken heart is again
Karen avoided Jack the next few days, she hated him... but yet she still loved him. One day she went to see Popuri and there Jack was again with a flower. Popuri smailed at him sweetly obviously loving him to peices, when Jack left she went too see Popuri, she was in her bedroom and was writing in her diary, they started talking, when Popuri went too the toilet she checked in the diary, it said:
Dear diary,
I feel really happy, the new boy Jack came here today and got me some flowers, I am astounded... Popuri XXX
Karen closed the dairy and ran home to hide her tears...
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Post by karenfreak on May 1, 2006 3:32:04 GMT -5
Yeah I feel sorry for her
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Post by EYO on May 1, 2006 9:51:25 GMT -5
Yes I like Karen, I cant help but feel sorry for her all the time. *lol*
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 1, 2006 21:28:53 GMT -5
Sorry! I was gonna post my thoughts earlier but my mom took my computer! I like it! More flirting!!! How come Karen is the one who always gets hurt!??
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Post by Herfefiny on May 3, 2006 22:35:20 GMT -5
Poor Karen! Will she get a flower?
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Post by karenfreak on May 6, 2006 5:51:20 GMT -5
5th chapter cumeing up.
5th chapter: The sorrow of the hearts
Karen avoided Jack for two seasons! Then the goddess festival came up, she wished that someone would ask her! On the day of the goddess festival there was no knock on the dor. She ran to the goddess festival and Jack wasnt there! She knocked on his door and there was no-one there! She ran too the falls and there was his hat on a stone she ran along the river until she was at the beach and there he was unconsious on the beach. She picked him up and knocked on Zacks door. He answered and took Jaack in Karen stayed by him until he woke up. When he woke up he smiled at her and thanked \Karen then went back too his house! Karen knew that even if he didnt love her they were still mates!
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 6, 2006 10:27:47 GMT -5
AWESOME! MORE PLEASE!
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Post by Herfefiny on May 6, 2006 11:45:03 GMT -5
awwww! how cute! But what happened to jack???
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Post by karenfreak on May 11, 2006 2:13:45 GMT -5
Chapter 6: I thought you loved me!?
Karen couldn't help it! She loved Jack and knew that Jack liked her! But she wasn't sure whether it was love like or like like! Karen was confused. One day she went to ask Jack, and she bumped into Ann and Popuri and Elli and Mary on he way all going to Jacks house! When they got there they all asked Jack if he loved them... all except Karen, "Jack do you love me?" Karen asked
" Yes Karen I love you! Not Elly or Pink girl or Ginger ninger or bookworm, you Karen!" Jack said smiling (By the way I like all the harvest Moon charactors, It's just Jacks opinion.)
"Jack will you marry me?" Karen asked
" Karen of course I will!" Jack hugged Karen... suddenly Karen woke up, it was all a dream.
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 11, 2006 16:12:22 GMT -5
I love it!!!!!
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Post by Herfefiny on May 11, 2006 18:22:36 GMT -5
A dream come true!
Good chapter though! XD
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i think that Jack flirting with all of the girls. 
