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Post by EYO on May 5, 2006 13:08:03 GMT -5
Lol, ok gals, I'll try and add more when I have the chance. So, here's more! There is also a "sex scene" is all I'm gonna call it, even though nothing actually happens(at least during the actual writing). So, you won't be reading anything, inappropriate. Let me know what you think!
Part 3 The Real Karen?
Karen finally made it to Jack's farm when she noticed that he was at the other end of the field walking her way, but could see her yet. She ran into his house to surpise him, like she has done before. After about ten minutes, Jack finally walked in... "Boo!" Karen yelled.
"Whoa! Oh, Karen, you almost gave me a heart attack!" Jack replied.
"Sorry, I was just wanted to be with someone who understands me..."
"Oh, did you have another fight with your dad?" Jack asked.
"I'm so sorry, but I punched my dad, but it was for a good reason this time I swear!" Karen started to cry. Jack walked over to her and wrapped his arms around her embracing her gently. "Its ok, calm down..I'm not mad at you. Just tell me what happened, okay?" Jack made sure to be very calm so she won't get worked up again.
"Well, you know when I beat up Rick a week ago?" "Yes."Jack replied. "Well, I had to go to anger management class and My dad and I ended up argueing about it and he slapped me, and I just freaked out and punched him!" Karen started crying again. Jack walked her to the bed so they could sit next to eachother and talk, obviously Jack was too tired to stand after working all day. "Karen, I know that you are upset about punching your dad, but he did slap you, but he did it to calm you down...or at least try. Your dad isn't very good with young girls apperently.
"Jack, thanks for being there for me." Karen said starting to smile again. "Welco..." before he could finish, Karen had leaned over and started kissing him and Jack was surprised at first but went along with it and they made out for at least half-an-hour until Karen said, "Can I stay with you tonight? Please?" Jack was unsure, because if Jeff came to the farm and saw them in the same bed, even if nothing happened...Jeff would flip! "...okay." Jack agreed. Karen immediately started getting undressed to get into bed, "Uhmmmm, Karen...what are you doing???" "Getting undressed, duh!" she replied."No, I mean..." Jack was dumbfounded at how little she was wearing at that moment. "How much are you going to wear?" Jack asked as he started to blush.
Jack started to look away... "Enough." was all she said as she walked up behind him and took off his shirt walked over to the bed, got under the blaket and layed down...
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Post by mineralgirl on May 5, 2006 13:27:47 GMT -5
.-. Now it makes sence why you would call this a 'sex scene'.
Gawd, I LOVE stories like this! #1pinky# ...Don't ask me why I do...I just do!
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Post by Herfefiny on May 5, 2006 20:35:49 GMT -5
Woah Karen! lol nice story
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Post by vanillakisses39 on May 5, 2006 21:08:25 GMT -5
.-. Now it makes sence why you would call this a 'sex scene'. Gawd, I LOVE stories like this! #1pinky# ...Don't ask me why I do...I just do! Exactly. They make good stories.
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 6, 2006 10:56:07 GMT -5
Its true. I like it please continue
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Post by EYO on May 9, 2006 13:04:41 GMT -5
It may get more graghic, I am giving this warning early to warn those to decide whether they want to keep reading or not. I will post more soon.
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Post by mineralgirl on May 9, 2006 18:09:48 GMT -5
It may get more graghic, I am giving this warning early to warn those to decide whether they want to keep reading or not. I will post more soon. Ooooh...graphic! ^^ (This is a sign that I'm reading too many romance mangas... .-.)
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 9, 2006 18:10:34 GMT -5
UR GOOFY! I still wanted to read it! Its a good story!
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Post by Kyattsuai on May 9, 2006 18:14:02 GMT -5
Teehee *joins the OOPWPRFKASHFT*
Anywho, nice story ^^ The only complaint is that two people talk in the same paragraph, but eh, I'm a grammar monster, so don't mind me ^^;;
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Post by EYO on May 10, 2006 20:03:58 GMT -5
lol, here comes some more!
Part 4 The Next Morning
*Yaaawn* Jack looks at the clock and it's only 4:00 AM! *oh no, what am I gonna do until 6:00? Since Jack normally gets up to start his day at six and doesn'y want to break his schedule.
"What are ya doin'" Karen said as she looked over at Jack seducingly. "Come here for a minute, I wanna tell you something..."
Jack paused for a second, then moved over to where she was. "Yes?" he replied. Karen then dove under the blanket and popped back up on top of Jack wrapping her arms and legs around him so he couldn't get away.
"Whoa! Whats goin' on!?" Jack said surprised.
"I just wanted to look you over in a way that only I can from up close, and I didn't want you to move." she replied.
*I guess I don't have much choice* "Okay..." Jack thought this was kinda odd, but had no other choice but to let what happens happen. Karen slid down a little so she could see more of him, but he still can't get free.
"I never noticed how big your muscles are. Your always wearing that same outfit...will you try to get away?"
"No." Jack replied.
Karen released him and he decided to just sit there until he finds an idea to "repay" her. She slid back up and layed down on his chest. *Wow, she's lighter than I thought!* She staredinto his eyes for a minute and Jack decided now was the time... Jack grabbed around her waist, and rolled over to where she was now under him and he slowely kissed her. Karen just layed there until he broke the kiss.
"Wow, what was that for?" Karen asked.
"I knew I had to repay you, and that was my special thanks." Jack replied. "Unless you want something better?"
Karen only nodded as he began kissing her neck and was working his way down...
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 10, 2006 20:45:13 GMT -5
Same here! That made me laugh Melody!
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 11, 2006 16:13:52 GMT -5
I can imagine you doing that!!
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Post by mineralgirl on May 11, 2006 19:21:32 GMT -5
Whoo! Great chapter! Must...read...more...*eyes wide* The only complaint is that two people talk in the same paragraph, but eh, I'm a grammar monster, so don't mind me ^^;; Grammar monsters, unite! *sends attack of punctuation at random people*
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Post by mineralgirl on May 12, 2006 9:42:21 GMT -5
Heh heh... ^^;;
\o/ lll <--A stupid random stick figure Jenna / \
, , <---My comma attack ,
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Post by Anonymouse on May 14, 2006 14:58:59 GMT -5
YAY Melody! I was beginning to get annoyed.
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