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Post by Butterscotch on Jul 12, 2005 17:37:41 GMT -5
Author's Note: This is the very first fan-fic I ever wrote! 
Its cute, but not well written. I hope you enjoy it!Lillia's Love by Butterscotch
part 1-Lillia FaintsIt was a warm day in the month of Spring. Lillia felt the gentle breeze on her face as she headed past the church. She was going to see the doctor. Her stomach gave a little squeeze. She hadn't told anyone, but lately she had been feeling worse than usual. Lillia was used to feeling weak and sick but lately.... Lillia started to wave to Carter, who was waiting for May and Stu to arrive. Suddenly, everything before Lillia's eyes grew blurry and then it all went black. Though she could not move she was aware of being held in strong arms and she could hear male voices. "Lillia! Lillia!" Zack's voice, and so near; he had to be the one holding Lillia. "Let's take her to the doctor, quickly!" Carter exclaimed. to be continued
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Post by moko on Jul 12, 2005 17:55:17 GMT -5
hmm, i think i read this one.............
did you have it posted on another part of the site?
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Post by Butterscotch on Jul 12, 2005 17:59:17 GMT -5
hmm, i think i read this one............. did you have it posted on another part of the site? It's posted on the main webpage, and at Fanfiction.net |
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Post by Entegy on Jul 12, 2005 19:56:24 GMT -5
You're reposting your old fanfics I see.
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Post by Butterscotch on Jul 12, 2005 20:09:58 GMT -5
You're reposting your old fanfics I see. Yup! ^^ |
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Post by Entegy on Jul 12, 2005 20:30:04 GMT -5
I posted the next chapter of my fanfic for competiton... Some competition. ;D
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Post by Butterscotch on Jul 13, 2005 13:55:21 GMT -5
part 2-Diagnosis
The doctor faced the small group. Rick and Popuri sat on either side of Lillia. Popuri was squeezing her mother's hand. There was a troubled look on the doctor's handsome face.
"Lillia, I'm afraid your condition has gotten worse. You have only a few months to live," Doc said.
Rick gasped and Popuri burst into noisy sobs.
"'I'm sorry, Lillia but I'm afraid there isn't anything more I can do for you," Doc said.
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A few days later Jack was putting crops into the shipping bin when Zack walked up. Not surprisingly he had not taken the news of Lillia's illness well. He looked as if he had not slept at all.
"Hey, Zack," Jack smiled.
"Hey," Zack said."Jack...I'm leaving in a few days. I want...I want to cure Lillia.I'm going to find that magic flower, the one Rod left to find."
"But, Zack," Jack said after a long moment,'Rod has been searching for those flowers for over a decade. You only have...you only have a few months."
"I have to try, Jack."
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Post by Candyapple on Jul 22, 2005 16:39:29 GMT -5
neat! i love it! ;D
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Post by Balto on Jul 24, 2005 8:57:04 GMT -5
I do too! Cool work!
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Post by hotcakes22 on Oct 1, 2005 20:59:59 GMT -5
Love it!
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Post by Pickle on Oct 8, 2005 23:21:01 GMT -5
I remember it!
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Post by Butterscotch on Oct 12, 2005 0:14:56 GMT -5
part 3- Manna Spills the Beans
In the days since Lillia's condition had worsened, every resident of Mineral Town had visited with Lillia. They all realized that each time they saw Lillia could be the last.
Today's visitor was Manna. She told Lillia all the gossip as she knitted an X-wool scarf for Duke. Lillia was opening her mail and only half-listening to Manna's prattling.
"...I just don't know how we're going to manage without Zack on the job," Manna was saying.
Lillia dropped the letter she was holding. She was very pale.
"What!" she gasped" Zack's leaving!?"
"You didn't know?" Manna said slowly. "Didn't Zack tell you?"
Lillia shook her head.
"Well," said Manna, "Zack is leaving to find that legendary flower that will cure you."
Lillia stood up. "Zack can't leave--he can't!" she whispered.
"Lillia, sit down--!" Manna cried, but Lillia was rushing out, showing more energy than she had in years. The display of energy was short-lived. Lillia had not even reached the road when she collapsed.
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Post by Pickle on Oct 14, 2005 21:01:46 GMT -5
Oh noes!
But seriously, it's sad!!!
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Post by Butterscotch on Oct 25, 2005 23:56:03 GMT -5
Part Four: "It's Lillia!"
Manna ran to her friend, screaming Lillia's name. Across the street Gray heard her and he ran to fetch the doctor. As he ran past the church he nearly collided with Carter.
"It's Lillia!" Gray gasped.
"I'll go to her!" Carter said quickly. As he hurried to the Poultry Farm he saw Zack heading towards the beach.
"Zack! It's Lillia--!" Carter began. He did not finish. Zack instantly began running in the direction of Lillia's house. Carter followed closely, but suddenly he veered onto the path that led, not to Lillia's house but into the woods. Zack never noticed.
Lillia was still lying on the ground outside her house; Manna had been too afraid to move Lillia lest she make things worse. Zack knelt on the ground.
"Oh. Lillia," he breathed.
"Zack?" Lillia smiled. "I'm so glad I got to see you one las time..." She reached up and stroked Zack's face.
"I love you, Zack," she whispered.
To be Continued!
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Post by Pickle on Oct 29, 2005 14:01:10 GMT -5
Awww!
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