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Post by Limegreen Queen on Apr 10, 2006 20:15:27 GMT -5
Your welcome dude.
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Post by Emily on Apr 18, 2006 18:54:05 GMT -5
Really sorry I haven't poosted, I've been on vacation!
Ch-24: RESPECT
I was on the verge of laughing.
“Mr. Peeper isn’t nice!” Another chirped indignantly. “He looked at what Miss Pretty did not want him to see!” They all shook their heads as if scolding Rick. I covered my mouth, trying hard not to laugh. Luckily, the sprites didn’t notice.
Rick smiled. “Kids,” He said. “She is my fiancé. I have the right to do what I want.”
“No, no!” The same sprite cried. “Doesn’t matter! Still not nice!” I stuffed my fist into my mouth, trying even harder not to laugh.
“Go away!” Rick ordered. “I’ll throw sticks at you! Leave me and her alone!” I snuck out of the river at this point to put my clothes on.
Another sprite spoke. “Mr. Peeper is mean as well.” He announced. “He has to be...” He whispered to his fellow kids. “...taken away from Miss Pretty!” He finished. “Miss Pretty doesn’t belong here, too dangerous and him!” He waggled a finger at Rick. “He also doesn’t deserve her! Let her come with us, back to the village!” He pointed at me, I just finishing changing,. His friends ran over and grabbed my arms.
“Kids!” I shouted. “It’s ok! He’s my boyfriend! I would have shown him anyway! You children need a little respect for us, you know!” I shook them off and clenched my fists. They just simply stared at me.
“Something wrong with her, aye.” A sprite whispered to another. “Gone her head off, she is.”
“What does THAT mean?” I snapped, and Rick nodded.
“Just come on, miss!” The sprite begged we really want you to see the village!”
“If you promise to give us respect.” I grumbled.
“Promise, cross our heart to die, stick 1,000 needles in our eyes and stew and fry.” They promised.
“Ok.” I admitted.
They cheered. “Come on, come on!” They cried, and led me away.
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Post by melody on Apr 21, 2006 15:49:30 GMT -5
Haha... Great chapter! I should've seen this sooner.  |
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Post by Emily on Apr 21, 2006 15:56:10 GMT -5
TOLD YA! TOLD YA TOLD YA TOLD YA!
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Post by melody on Apr 21, 2006 16:05:18 GMT -5
I know.... >_< I have been too busy, haven't I?  The truth is revealed. |
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Post by Emily on Apr 21, 2006 16:12:31 GMT -5
I knew it! Knew it knew it knew it!
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Post by Limegreen Queen on Apr 25, 2006 20:35:35 GMT -5
That was good Melody!
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Post by EYO on May 2, 2006 10:01:11 GMT -5
Please do continue, I like it! It pretty funny. *even though Jack is evil*
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Post by vanillakisses39 on May 3, 2006 18:48:03 GMT -5
Aww, your story is so cute.
I love Rick.
Oh yes.
Loooove Rick. <333
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Post by Herfefiny on May 5, 2006 0:05:13 GMT -5
That story is aswesome!!!! ...but Van  and villagers..scary..just joking! You're a great writer! that story was AMAZING! good job! =D |
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Post by Kikyou Saya Rin-Ren on Jul 2, 2006 2:11:37 GMT -5
I was looking for this story recently... I couldn't remember what it was called but knew it was really good!
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Post by Emily on Jul 7, 2006 16:10:29 GMT -5
I will write the next chapter soon, I ppromise!
And beg me with a million pms if I don't.
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Post by Emily on Jul 7, 2006 16:11:00 GMT -5
I will write the next chapter soon, I ppromise!
And beg me with a million pms if I don't.
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and villagers..scary..just joking!
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