Comfort Me

[pendulous threads]

Bye! I hope you write more soon!

[Emily]

Ch. 4-Survey
I yawned. “Popuri! Rick! Blossom!” Lillia called. Rick, on the floor (he wanted me to use his bed), stood up and stretched. He walked into the closet as I stood up and picked up some clothes.
“What are you doing that for?” I asked.
“I’m changing to, and we might not want to see each other’s bodies” He explained.
I nodded. He wouldn’t see the scars on my body.
When we both had changed we both went downstairs, to see scrambled eggs, bacon, and pancakes. “Mother!” Rick said delightedly. “My birthday!”
“It is your birthday?” I asked Rick. “Of course!” He flashed a toothy grin. “That’s cool because you came yesterday and it’s like you’re my present!” He hugged me. I nodded, but I guaranteed myself to get him a present.
We finished quickly. Delicious! I hadn’t had a good meal for three years, I kept telling Rick. He seemed confused, but kept nodding.
“Come upstairs.” He said. He walked up. I stared at him. What is it? I snagged an egg from the table and followed him. He was at his desk, writing on a piece of paper.
“Let’s tell each other more about ourselves.” He said, and showed the paper.
Survey
__________________Blossom________Rick______________
Nickname:
Current/Past jobs:
Boy/Girl most liked:
Most Annoy:
Most Like:
Chickens:
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“So we’re doing a survey.” I said. He nodded, and started filling in the blanks. “My nickname is Ricky,” He said. “I am a chicken farmer,” Another pause, “I like Blossom most,” He grinned at me. “I hate the boys cheating; I like Blossom,” He grinned again, “AND I LOVE CHICKENS!!!” He yelled.
“My nickname is Bloss,” I said. “I used to be a slave,” Rick looked at me. “I like Rick, I hate masters, I like love, and I like chickens.”
Rick nodded again, and filled my blanks. Then he looked up. “I’m sorry that you were a slave.” He said sadly. “Someone like you should be treated fairly.”
“What about me?” A voice rang out. Rick turned to the door. “Get out, Kai.” He said angrily. “Whatever.” Kai said in a smooth voice. “Come on, babe.” He swooped down and picked me up. “Hey!” I yelled, trying to wriggle free. Kai held tight, kicked Rick when he came over, and started to leave the house.

[Emily]

Ch. 5-Beach
I decided to give up when we reached the beach. True, I had struggled, but Kai held me too tight. I asked him why he took me.
“We wanna see you, babe.” He said. I shook my head. “You already have Karen and Popuri.” I said. “Well, who cares?” He said. He put me down, and led me inside a building.
“Hey Kai!” An eco of voices ran around the room. Cliff sat with a red haired braided girl, but he waved at me. It was obvious he liked me better. Grey, sitting with a black-haired girl, kept smiling at me nonstop. Tim paid no attention to me, but the nurse, Elli, waved. Popuri and another girl sat together in the corner.
“Kai! Kai!” Popuri said, beckoning to the spot next to her. He shook his head. The other beckoned to her spot, but he shook his head too. He made me sit down at another table, and went to get everyone’s food.
Quick as a wink, Popuri ran up. “Switch-quick!” She said. I nodded and ran over to her seat. I did not want to sit by Kai! The girl smiled. “I’m Karen.” She said. “Did Rick tell you about me?” She asked. I nodded.
“Here you go everyone!” Kai called. He went around, some strange reason closing his eyes, and served everyone. He pushed two plates on Karen’s and my table.
I ate. Apparently Popuri and I had the same tastes; I would have ordered the same thing. Suddenly I heard a yell.
“Popuri!” Kai yelled. “What-Where is-How-” He suddenly glared at Karen and I.
“So you switched places.” Kai said, switching to his smooth voice. “Ok, then. I’ll play along.” He beckoned Karen to come to him. As she walked over, he grabbed her arm, shoved her into the seat, walked over to hers, and sat down. He still found a way to sit with me.
“Blossom…” Someone whispered. Kai, so absorbed in talking, didn’t hear. “Blossom…” He whispered again. I looked out of the window, and there stood Rick. “You really think I would leave you, huh?” Rick grinned as he whispered. “Try to sneak out. I’ll wait here.”
“Kai!” Elli called. “I want another soda!” She winked at me. I nodded gratefully. As he went, I jumped up. I laughed. “See you all!” I screamed happily. I turned and ran to the door. Kai and the other boys jumped up and came to the door, but Rick and I were already running far away.

[melody]

I was going to guess Rick! But....I didn't ._. That was my first guess though....

It's really good so far, Emily! I like it. ^-^

[Emily]

Thanks. O.O I alreay wrote another chapter

Wanna see it?

[melody]

*-* I wanna read it!

[Emily]

It has Jack in it, and she thinks she's falling in love with him *-*
Ch. 6-Present
“Suckers.” Rick said, panting, as we reached the Poultry Farm. “Yeah-but a great way to spend your birthday.” I said sarcastically. Rick nodded. “Why don’t you go buy some things?” He said, reached into his pocket, and handed me some money. ‘I have to take care of the chickens, and I don’t want you to work.” I smiled. I could get Rick his present!
I walked to the supermarket. I knew where it was, because when Rick was carrying me, I saw it. I walked inside.
‘Let’s see,’ I thought. ‘What does Rick like?’ I picked up chocolate. “Rick likes that, if it’s a present.” Somebody said. I looked up, and there was Karen.
Rick likes anything with chocolate,” Karen continued. “But he loves eggs.” “Can I buy one?” I asked. Karen sighed. “We don’t sell eggs.” Karen said. “But there is a really nice and cute boy farmer that would love to give you an egg.” I nodded. “Where could I find him?” I asked.
“Near your farm.” She answered. “He has a farm too, but gets all kinds of things. Things Rick likes.” She nodded. I put down the chocolate, nodded, and left.
‘Well!’ I thought as I reached the farm. ‘It’s certainly better than I thought.’ I stared out on the crop-filled field. There was a coop, a barn, and a stable too. I knocked on the large house’s door, and it opened.
‘Wow!’ I thought as a face appeared. ‘He is cute, like Karen said!’ He smiled. “Hello Blossom.” He said. “I heard about you. I’m Jack. Come in.”
“I would just really like an egg.” I asked. Jack nodded. “Just regular?” He asked. I nodded. “Ok.” He grinned. “Come with me.” Jack grabbed my arm, opened the door, and led me over to the chicken coop.
He walked around the hay and the chickens. He found a regular egg, and handed it to me. “Do you know where the Spa is?” I asked. He smiled. “Of course.” He grabbed my hand and led me there.
I spa-boiled the egg with Jack’s help. I thanked him and put the egg in my pocket.
“Thanks so much, Jack.” I said. He kissed my hand. “Anything for my lady.” He said. “Hurry along.” I ran off. But a thought stuck in my brain; would if I’m falling in love with Jack instead?

[melody]

^-^ Jack is a good person to fall for. But, Blossom and Rick are cute together. Nice chapter, Emily.

[Emily]

Yeah, Rick, Blossom, and Jack are going to have a huge[/b][/u] fight in later chapters because of that. In the end, Blossom is most likely gonna end up with Rick.
Unless the change of plan...

Blossom: Oh No! Not the change of Plan!
Me: There might be the change of plan! Aah!!!! Run from it!!!

[melody]

Jack is good though. *-* *votes for change of plan*

[Emily]

Blossom: What are you doing to me!

Me: Changing the plan! You will fall in love with Jack! Mhahaha!!!

Blossom: NOOOOO!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!

[melody]

Me: You must Blossom!

Blossom: Whatever. At least Jack's hot.

[Emily]

I will get writing right away!

Blossom: Make me fall in love with Jack if you must V.V

[melody]

^______^ YAY!

[Tsuki]

Hey this is really good I hope you write more soon!