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Post by Noffie on May 18, 2006 18:38:16 GMT -5
Chapter 4 "Hey lookie there!" Gray ran out to see ... something..Weird "Poke it" he shoved Rick toward it hoping he will touch the small object "what is it?" "ooooh lookie! can this get any better? There are chickens on this...Screen of some type!" Rick picked up the small... thing? and admired the small chickens on the front "look a chick!"  Doc walked out of his cabin on to the main part of the ship "WHOA LOOK A ..... What is it?" then he came closer to get a good look "is it.....Healthy?" Won came out singing the Won song "Golden service Time Golden service for you and ME!" "WHAT IN THE WORLD?!?" won ran over " That Robe does not go with your eyes Rick do you have half a mind?" Rick looked down at his robe hmmm do kitties and bunnies go with pink? "Kitties and bunnies love pink!" Rick dusted off the robe and glared at won "Cut it out you two!" Gray pushed back Won and Rick looking at the object of healthy-ness (at least thats what they called it) Kai studied it hard "I know what it is its a-" TO BE CONTINUED!" |
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Post by Noffie on May 23, 2006 19:58:33 GMT -5
....well? Like it?? no one is answering come'on its my firstfanfic *cries*
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 23, 2006 21:47:08 GMT -5
Sorry!! Its good Lil!!! I was busy!! sorry!! |
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Post by Herfefiny on May 24, 2006 20:44:27 GMT -5
Oh right! My computer must have broken because I swear I left a comment! Oh well, anyways, I thought it was great!
I wonder what the "Thing" is...
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Post by Ann on May 24, 2006 20:58:11 GMT -5
What's the thing? What's the thing? I hope you're planning to write more!
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Post by melody on May 24, 2006 20:59:52 GMT -5
I already know what it is.  I think... |
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Post by Noffie on Jun 1, 2006 19:29:16 GMT -5
by the way sorry it took soo long Chapter 5 "The Thing or <Arriving> "Its called a ... talking device u put ur ear here and talk see?" Kai handed it to Gray "try it! I think u have to kno the number tho " Gray pushed in his home phone number -Burrrrrp burrrp- hello? Hello? Its Jill speaking Gray was confuesed what kind of object makes voices come out.-. this is awesome! But, of course Jill was not about to wait an hour to hear someone say hi soooo she hanged up i bet u would do the same  Doctor took it from Gray's hand "I dont kno..are we sure its healthy???" to beeee continued srry how short it is #indifferent160ac# |
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Post by coolgirl13 on Jun 2, 2006 13:19:48 GMT -5
That's okay. Besides, it was good.
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