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Post by Herfefiny on May 14, 2006 19:23:50 GMT -5
BEAUTIFUL!! I'M IN LOVE WITH UR STORY. lol thanks. I'll try to write more tonight! ;D
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 14, 2006 19:42:24 GMT -5
yeah!!!!!!
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Post by Herfefiny on May 14, 2006 20:29:33 GMT -5
Here you are! Yes, it is another "Bluehanger" and we also see more of Eve and BLue's relationship! Yay! ;D Enjoy!
Chapter fifteen: Blue’s Confessions
Eve sat next to Blue by the river. She had finally gotten him away from work and dragged him over there. It had taken a while, but now was her chance to start asking questions. Eve wanted Blue to trust, and this would be the first step. “So... why are we here?” he asked boredly. “Blue, I can trust you, right?” Eve asked. “Yes, of course.” Blue replied. “Can you trust me?” Eve asked him. Blue looked at her seriously. They’re eyes met. “I don’t know. Can I?” he asked her, looking away. “Blue! You know you can trust me! I- I...” Eve stuttered. “You what?” Blue asked forcefully. Eve tried to change the subject, but Blue didn’t notice. “What?” he asked again. Eve knew it was true, but she couldn’t tell Blue somehow. Why wouldn’t the words she had been waiting to tell him, come out? Eve felt tears form in her eyes. Why? Why couldn’t she just say it? Suddenly, Eve felt some hands slip into hers. Blue looked straight into her eyes. She could never pull away from a gaze like that. “Eve, I love you too.” he said. His voice had changed from forcing to loving. “If you love me then why don’t you trust me?” she asked. She could feel hot tears slide down her face. “Please Blue! How can we live if you don’t trust me?” she cried. “It’s not... I do trust you!” he said. “Then let me help you! Come on Blue! I know something in your past makes you the way you are! Quiet, shy! Come on Blue!” Eve cried again. Blue looked away, and let go of her hands. “I...can’t...” Blue closed his eyes, and when he opened them tears fell down his face. “Oh Blue...” Eve said sadly. She hugged him.
Eve stared at the beautiful night sky. Blue sat next to her in silence. They both just stared. Eve suddenly heard a quiet snore. She looked up. Blue had fallen asleep. Eve smiled at him. He looked so peaceful. As Eve stared at the sky, she felt her eyelids become heavy. She slowly fell asleep next to Blue.
Blue shot up. Where was he? He blinked and looked around. He remembered falling asleep next to Eve. He lay back down. Eve was next to him, sleeping soundly. Blue looked up at the beautiful night sky. he had had the same dream. The one with the person yelling his name. Why did he keep having it? What did it mean? Blue looked at Eve, He remembered the first time he had seen her sleeping. They were n the same spot. Blue remembered Eve asking him if he trusted her. Did he? Did Blue trust anyone? Was Eve right Was he shy and quiet because he didn’t trust anyone? Suddenly, Eve’s eyes fluttered open. “Blue?” she asked sitting up. “What’s wrong?” Blue stared at her. He knew it was coming... “Eve, you were right. I need to talk about my past.”
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 14, 2006 20:32:02 GMT -5
NO! U MONKEY POO HEAD!!!!!! IT'S AWESOME! U BETTER RIGHT MORE TONIGHT
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Post by Herfefiny on May 14, 2006 22:00:25 GMT -5
Revealing time! Chapter sixteen: More confessions“My parents died,” Blue began. Eve stared at Blue, concern in her eyes and she heard herself whisper “How?” “Before I came here, I lived in a city. I came to work at my Uncle’s farm when I turned seventeen, and then I went back for my eighteenth birthday...” Blue’s voice got shaky and his eyes glistened. He took a deep breath and continued. “They were going o buy me a ‘surprise’ gift and... then it happened. They crashed and died. That time it was just my parents. My younger brother was at home with me and then...he came back with me after that, to my Uncle’s farm. At first it was fine, and life was getting better, but I could hear him crying at night. I knew he couldn’t get over the fact that our parents were gone, and I could tell that he never liked living here. He liked the city, and I could tell... But I could never do anything for him!” Eve saw teas run down Blue’s face. She felt bad for him, but she didn’t move. Blue sniffed. “And then...there was that typhoon...I told him not to go out...but... they found his body the next day. He had been so depressed, I wonder if this was better for him...” Blue put his face in his hands, and his shoulders started shaking. Eve hugged him. “That’s sad...” she said, trying to comfort him. Blue and Eve stared at the sky. “What time is it?” Eve asked Blue. He shrugged. “It is nice out here.” Eve said. Blue nodded. Eve looked at him. “Do you trust me?” she asked. Blue looked at her. “Yes.” he said sincerely. “Eve, you really did help me.” Eve smiled at him. “I’m glad.”
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 14, 2006 22:02:59 GMT -5
TEARS> > > > > > . . . . . . I love it! Ur story roxz chicklet!
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Post by Herfefiny on May 15, 2006 18:51:13 GMT -5
Thankies! ;D Here is the next chapter!
Chapter seventeen: Summer Storm
“So, how’d it go?” Gwen asked Eve the next day. They were sitting on the dock by the ocean. It was Gwen’s day off and Eve didn’t have to work until six when the bar opened. “Oh...It was fine...I guess.” Eve sighed. “Really? You seem unsure. And you’ve been sighing all day! What’s wrong Eve?” Gwen said, looking at Eve, concerned. “Nothing’s wrong! It’s just... I fell bad for him. But there’s nothing I can do! I wonder if I helped him or hurt him?” Eve said sadly. She looked down at her hands. Just then, a dolphin swam up to the dock. Gwen smiled. “Eve, come here!” she said, jumping on the dolphin. “What?! I’m not getting on that-“ Gwen pulled Eve on the dolphin. “GWEN!” The dolphin started swimming fast. Gwen was laughing, and Eve was screaming and laughing at the same time. When the dolphin stopped, they were at an island. Eve jumped off, Gwen following her. “Wow. This is beautiful!” Eve gasped, and looked around. There were palm trees and beautiful flowers all around them. The island wasn’t big, but it was big enough to lie down and sunbath. “Gwen, this is wonderful! How’d you find out about it?” Eve asked, lying on the grass. “I became friends with that dolphin.” Gwen smiled, and sat next to Eve.
Blue sighed and sat down. He had been working for hours, and it was getting late. Ellen walked outside. “Blue! You’ve been working all day! Go out and enjoy yourself!” she smiled at her younger cousin. Blue nodded slowly. He walked out of the ranch, and looked around. “Great. What do I do now?” he thought sadly. He looked over at the bar. The lights just turned on. He would have gone in, but he wasn’t in the mood to talk to anyone. That would have been why he had been working all day. He saw two giggling figures run in. He recognized one to be Eve and that was probably Gwen she was with. Eve turned around and saw him. He couldn’t see in the dark, but he knew she had smiled at him.
Eve handed out drinks to the customers. She had seen Blue, and expected him to come in, but he never did. That night, as Eve was cleaning up, she looked up at Gwen nervously. “Do you think something bad happened? What if he suddenly got sick! It is Raining! What if he suddenly caught a cold? Why wouldn’t he come in?” Eve asked worriedly. Gwen looked up from her drink. “Who?” she asked, puzzled. “Blue! That’s who!” Eve yelled angrily. “Whoa! Calm down Eve! I’m sure nothing happened! He probably just got tired and decided to go to bed. That boy works all day you know. I wouldn’t be surprised if he fell asleep in the grass!” Gwen saw the more worried look on Eve’s face, and decided to stay quiet. “Anyway, I’m sure he’s fine! Don’t worry!” Gwen gave her a tiny smile but Eve still looked scared. “Speaking of sleep,” Gwen yawned for effect, “You need some to. You’re done here, you should go to bed!” Gwen patted her on the back, and stood up. “Bye Eve!” and she left.
Eve stared up at the ceiling. What if Blue didn’t like her anymore? What if talking to him last night, ruined their relationship rather then perfecting it? She shook her head sadly. Poor Blue... She had thought she had had it bad, but now she knew...She knew about his life. How awful it must feel... Eve rolled over, and slowly fell asleep.
Eve was running happily. The beautiful summer flowers, rubbed against her legs. She fell down in the grass, when suddenly, it started raining. Eve didn’t mind. She let the rain hit her face as she lay on the grass. Someone gave her a shake. She looked up to see who it was. It was a boy. He looked like a younger version of Blue, but he was wearing his hat backwards. He smiled at her, but he looked like he wanted to tell her something. He looked up at the sky and so did she. It was a storm.
Eve jumped up in bed, the memory of her dream still ringing in her head. It was raining hard, and the Summer was slowly arriving. Eve pulled on a jacket and ran out the door.
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 15, 2006 18:59:03 GMT -5
I like this chapter but wasn't it already Summer??
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Post by Herfefiny on May 15, 2006 20:01:51 GMT -5
No, it was spring! Onwe of the recent chapters was called "Spring Flowers" Well, it was SUPPOSED to be spring! :X
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 15, 2006 20:07:15 GMT -5
O! Sorry I'm just stewpid. Like you didn't already know that
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Post by Herfefiny on May 15, 2006 21:15:03 GMT -5
lol it's ok! XD
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Post by Herfefiny on May 15, 2006 22:52:34 GMT -5
Here is the next chapter! I think it's a bit cheesy, but the next one will be better. Chapter eighteen: Mother’s HillEve ran as fast as she could. The rain hit her face, but she ignored it. It almost felt nice, to be back in the rain, and at least it wasn’t a big storm. She had an instinct that Blue would be on Mother’s Hill. She finally got to the mountain, and climbed like she never had before. Eve finally got to the top, and she looked down at her cut hands. She ignored the stinging pain and looked around. “Blue?” she called. She heard something move. Eve’s stomach dropped. Then she heard a voice. “Eve?” It was Blue! Eve ran toward his voice. He was in the cave. When she saw him she gave him a warm bear hug. “Blue! I thought you were gone! Why did you run away? Why would you run away? How could you...” “Eve! I was just coming up here for a...visit. You didn’t have to worry! I didn’t want you to...” he looked at his hands sadly. “Blue, I... I’m just glad you’re OK.” she sounded like a mother who had lost her child. Eve sniffed “I thought you would’ve...well...I...” Eve felt hot tears run down her cheeks. “How did you find me?” Blue asked, not noticing her tears. “It was a dream! I think I saw...well that doesn’t matter, but whoever it was, he told me...He was silent, but I could tell that was a warning. He helped me.” Eve looked at the sky, as though the boy from her dream would come out of the clouds. “Who was it?” Blue asked curiously. “I don’t know...but he looked a lot like you, Blue. It was like he was your...” she stopped at the word ‘brother’. “He did look a lot like me.” said Blue, reading her mind. Eve rested her head on his shoulder. “Oh blue, I’m so sorry. It shouldn’t have turned out that way.” she said, trying to comfort him. Blue nodded sadly. “Or maybe it should have...He was so depressed...”he sighed. Eve suddenly asked the question she had been wondering the whole time. “How old was he when-“ “Fifteen.” Blue answered. “Oh...” Eve sighed. “Maybe we should get back home...” she suggested. Blue looked up. “I guess...” he said. Eve smiled weakly at him as they began to climb down the mountain. It was Early in the morning when Eve went to visit Blue. He was inside the barn, milking a cow. “She’s so cute!” Eve squealed at the cow. Blue smiled. “Hi!” he responded. She sat down next to him. “Let’s go outside!” she said. “Ok. Let me finish this.” Eve sat next to Blue by the river. The grass was still wet from the previous night, but they didn’t mind. “You know, it’s been a long time since I’ve had one of these.” Eve commented happily. “Wha-” She leaned in and kissed him. And it seemed like it lasted forever...
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 15, 2006 22:56:47 GMT -5
AWWWWWWWWW!!! It's cute!!! Yet sad ;;;;;;;;;
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Post by Herfefiny on May 16, 2006 17:31:04 GMT -5
lol yes it is. I need to write better chapter, though. These are getting...unneeded... :X
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Post by Herfefiny on May 17, 2006 16:57:27 GMT -5
I hope everyone enjoys this next chapter! I got the idea from Limegreen Queen (Thanks! ) Chapter nineteen: LeavingGwen was going to meet Eve. She had been so upset last night; she hoped that she could make her feel better. Gwen walked into the bar. Duke was at the counter. “Hi Gwen. Are you here for Eve?” he asked. Gwen smiled and nodded. “She is getting some wild berries. She’ll be back in a while.” he said. Gwen pulled up a chair and sat down. “So...Is Eve still going out with that...Dan?” Gwen blushed. “Umm.... No...they uh....stopped...liking each other...” What was she saying. Was that the best she could come up with?! And how could Eve’s uncle not know she broke up with Dan- actually, they had never even gone out! “Oh. So then who is she going out with?” Duke asked, interrupting her thoughts. “Blue.” Gwen responded automatically. “Blue?! You mean that boy who works at that ranch?” “Yep! That’s him! I’m also pretty sure they’re going to take their relationship to...the next level soon.” Gwen said, smiling. just then, Eve walked in the door. “Eve your friend...needs to go. We need to talk.” Duke said to his niece. “What?” Gwen gasped. Outside Gwen tried eavesdropping On the conversation. The only thing she heard was Eve screaming: “MOVING?! HOW CAN YOU DO THIS?! I LOVE HIM! HOW CAN YOU MAKE ME MOVE?! I’M ALMOST NINETEEN!!!” and then a series of different...names. Gwen suddenly felt her stomach drop. Moving? Eve? Was this her fault? Why hadn’t she kept her mouth shut? Now her best friend was moving and...She guiltily looked towards Blue Sky Ranch. She had just broken two hearts... Eve had tears in her eyes. Moving? Why? How could her uncle do this?! She loved Blue! Why was that bad. Eve refused to pack. She refused to do anything! She had to get out of this somehow! But how? Eve couldn’t leave Blue! She loved him! And Gwen? Her best friend? How would she live without her? Eve wondered if she could live with Gwen... Her Uncle said he knew what was best for her, and if she wanted to stay here, she couldn’t live with him. How did he know what was best for her?! And how could he kick her out! Eve knew shed have to go along with this crap, but eventually, shed come back here...Eventually... The ferry left early a week later. Eve stood on the dock, hugging Gwen. She was crying, as Eve was. “This is all my fault.” she sobbed. “No, it’s not. He would’ve *sniff* found out eventually...” Eve whispered. Blue didn’t kiss her, he just hugged her. “I’ll be back. Don’t forget me.” she whispered in his ear. “I never would.” he responded. Eve got on the ferry. “Next stop, Mineral Town!” said the captain, over the announcement box. Eve cried even harder.
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