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Post by cookie on May 6, 2006 19:14:56 GMT -5
chapter 1
Mary was secretly in love with Gray, but... how hold she tell him? what if he didn't love her? One day she saw him coming into the library. "Mary" he asked "Yeah"? "Want to go on a...... Date"? He said quietly. "I'd love to"she said. "Where do you want to go"?Gray said, "How aboutwe go grab something at the inn and then go to your place or mine"?She said. "Sure"! he shouted.
If you like the story i will write chapter 2 if you don't like it i won't write it. TY
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Post by cookie on May 6, 2006 19:15:50 GMT -5
opps don't answer the question if you don't want to
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Post by cookie on May 6, 2006 19:17:26 GMT -5
after you read a part of the story go to something called- Question for Marys Love thank you
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Post by cookie on May 6, 2006 19:26:55 GMT -5
ITs not called Questions for Marys Love thank you its called Question for marys love
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Post by cookie on May 6, 2006 19:40:36 GMT -5
PLEASE TELL ME IF YOU LIKE IT OR DISLIKE IT
THANK YOU!!!!! =)
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Post by Butterscotch on May 6, 2006 21:31:59 GMT -5
Please do not post six times in a row. As for your story, it seems cute, but it's too early to tell now whether or not it will be good. If you want to write, then write
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Post by cookie on May 7, 2006 0:27:23 GMT -5
sorry.....
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Post by cookie on May 7, 2006 0:39:23 GMT -5
chapter 2
So gray and mary went to the inn to grab something to eat. "2 cups of water,2 box lunch and 2 apple pies to go thank you" Mary said. So they both wanted to eat at Gray's house so they went there "mary we should do thid agian real soon" He said happily. "yeah" i would like that" she said. So they ate the dinner, "Bye" said Mary, "Bye" said Gray and they headed home. "Mom" Mary said, "I'm Home" it was midnight when she got back "it's about time you got home you had me sick with worry"! Anna shouted, "Mary honey please get ready for bed". In 30min she was done "Night Mom" mary said, "Good night honey"she said back.
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Post by Herfefiny on May 7, 2006 0:40:12 GMT -5
I liek it so far. please continue!
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Post by cookie on May 7, 2006 14:09:07 GMT -5
chapter 3
The next day Mary opened the Library the first customer was Gray. "Mary when should we go out agian"? asked Gray. "How about tommarow I get the day off"said Mary "ok" said Gray. In a little while Docter came in. "Hello docter" said Gray and Mary at the same time. "Hi Mary Hi Gray" said Docter. "Do you need a book"? asked Mary. "Yeah can you help me find a book about stamina and fatigue"? asked docter. "Sure" said Mary so they searched all the shelves. "Found it" shouted Mary. "Thanks" said Docter so Docter checked the book out.
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Post by Noffie on May 7, 2006 14:17:39 GMT -5
^^ yAY doctor i like it!
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Post by cookie on May 7, 2006 14:30:08 GMT -5
thx
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Post by cookie on May 7, 2006 14:42:18 GMT -5
Chapter 4
The next day they go to the inn grab lunch and go to Mary's this time. "Mary..."said Gray shyly "will you uh..... marry me"?.*silence* He shows her the Blue Feather. "Yes"!!!!! she shouted "I will"!. everyone stares at her she turns red and smiles in embarrassment. So the next day they planed the wedding they said it would be in a week. They get the clothes for the wedding. On the day of the wedding Mary gets her hair ready and then they both change and the wedding begins. The Priest says all those words and then the important part. "Do you Gray Take Mary to be your wedded wife"?. "I do" said Gray. "Do you Mary take Gray to be your wedded husband"?. "I do" said Mary. So Gray gives her the Blue Feather and everyone congratulates them.
One more chapter i think
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Post by cookie on May 7, 2006 14:50:17 GMT -5
chapter 5 In 2 months they get a baby boy they and they name him Tom. Tom needs lots of attension, food, and alot of dipers lol. When tom got older he always asked mary and gray if farming, fishing, or selling things was fun. They always said farming so he might grow up to be a big, strong, and healthy farmer. Tom since he was growing needed even more food good thing they had anough money to feed him or they would be eaten out of house and home. When there son grew up and Mary and gray were both old. Tom married Rick's and Karen's girl and had a cute Baby girl and they all lived happily ever after. The EndHope you liked it
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Post by Noffie on May 7, 2006 17:03:47 GMT -5
awww tom got married ^^ cute
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