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Post by May on Jan 2, 2007 16:03:53 GMT -5
I am also trying to write more details, not more conversations....
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Post by May on Jan 2, 2007 16:10:00 GMT -5
Thank you!
Chapter 19...I think-
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Now her feet dragged. She assumed they wouldn't walk farther than to Gotz's house, but she was wrong. They took their time trudging to the mountain.
Claire sighed as she saw a figure looking at the newly-risened moon on Mother's Hill. She didn't want to be around anyone. Who could it be? No one comes here...
Take a chance Claire.
"H-hello?"
"Good evening," the strange figure greeted.
"Do I know you?" Claire asked, studying the young man's face.
"I'm not sure Claire, I'm really not sure..."
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DUN
DUN
DUUUN
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Post by May on Jan 2, 2007 16:10:25 GMT -5
Sorry, short chapter..... WAAAAA!!! I AM SO SORRY
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Post by Raika on Jan 2, 2007 17:08:53 GMT -5
Ooh cliffhanger. ;D
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Post by Kikyou Saya Rin-Ren on Jan 2, 2007 19:39:23 GMT -5
I bet it's Kai!
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Post by May on Jan 3, 2007 15:58:38 GMT -5
Hmmmm....... I FEEL POWERFUL! *Poses like superman*
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Post by Raika on Jan 3, 2007 21:32:54 GMT -5
Well Claire studied the man's face, and I think she'd recognize him if it was Kai. ^^
...hmm...I wonder who it could be?
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Post by Kikyou Saya Rin-Ren on Jan 3, 2007 23:22:30 GMT -5
^I guess you're right... Still, how would he know her name if she didn't know him? And that would make the 'I don't know Claire, I don't know.' comment make sense.
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Post by May on Jan 6, 2007 14:09:11 GMT -5
I should write the story in advance like normal people do...
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Post by Raika on Jan 6, 2007 16:07:14 GMT -5
Hmm...maybe he's a stalker?? ;D
What do you mean you should write the story in advance?
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Post by Kikyou Saya Rin-Ren on Jan 6, 2007 17:22:41 GMT -5
I think she means write it then type it, or type it on Word or something than copy + paste.
Oh, and I never write in advance. ;D
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Post by Raika on Jan 7, 2007 0:45:15 GMT -5
Oh okay I see. Thank you.  I write in advance but it depends on the writer. You're doing fine, but if you think writing in advance will help, then do what you wish. |
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Post by May on Jan 7, 2007 18:02:27 GMT -5
Ya...I'm confusing myself...
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Post by May on Jan 7, 2007 18:20:21 GMT -5
Thanks for commenting! Woot woot for "Hey There Delilah" (The Song) Okay, this chapter may not make sense AT ALL, because this song has inspired me! Okay, no I AM confusing myself.... oh whatever. Chapter 20- Claire sighed. It was something someone wouldn't do when they think some stranger is about to pull out a gun and shoot. But Claires different like that. "I think I love you Claire," The figure continued. "No, you don't." "Do you know me?" "No, I don't." "Claire." "No, it's not." The stranger sighed as Claire continued her babyish behavoir. By now, the sky began to darken, and the full moon had rose. "Claire." "No, it's not." ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Since that chapter was short, I'll write another. Chapter 21- Claire sat on a nearby rock and showed the stranger a stubborn face, not that you could see it or anything. ~wink wink~ "Who the hell are you." Claire said more as a statement than a question. "Claire, I think you should determine that." "How the hell should I know who you are if you just say my friggin' name over and over aain, and it's pitch black out here, and you say you love me?!? Your acting like Kai!" She screamed, no tears. "Good." ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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Post by May on Jan 7, 2007 18:21:46 GMT -5
I need to end this fanfic cuz I totally screwed up Claire and Kai...I don't know how to end it...
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