twinkles
Small Milk
A Chibi Star
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Post by twinkles on May 27, 2006 11:06:22 GMT -5
Hi! I thought about making a story about what jack does to impress his wife...which is Leia...the mermaid. he wants to prove to her that she married a human for a reason. please enjoy. Honey, I Shrunk the Cow Jack was a happy man. He wasn't just happy, he was overjoyed! He now had a son named Christopher and a wife...who is a mermaid. Unfortunately she is losing the spark between them. She wonders now and then why she married a human, she could've married her old mermaid boyfriend in the ocean so she is beginning to doubt what she has done with her life. At night she would say this. "Did I really deserve this? Am I going to be a mermaid out of water for life?" Jack would come in the room and see this, so one day he went to Daryl for advice, Daryl didn't want to see Jack anymore after he married his experiment....or should I say crush? So Daryl gave him the advice on actually making something. Daryl ment to say to make like a card. Jack took it the wrong way since he was talking to a scientist and built an invention. It was a machine that he didn't quite operate yet. Now let's get on to what happened. Jack had a famous cow named Marissa. She was the oldest and best cow he had. Accidentally when he was getting his wife to see what he made...he shrunk that cow. Leia really loved that cow and when she came in with her eyes closed, she screamed...for her tail had touched something very soft...she picked it up and there was the cow. This time she fainted.
tell me what you think.
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VenusAdept
Small Milk
Long time no see :D
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Post by VenusAdept on May 27, 2006 11:46:48 GMT -5
Lol. Very cute. ^^
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Post by Herfefiny on May 27, 2006 13:17:45 GMT -5
lol poor Jack. or should I say Leia? Or should I say Marisssa? It was a good story
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Post by Kikyou Saya Rin-Ren on May 27, 2006 14:53:21 GMT -5
Yay! I love it! Are you planning to write more?(I hope so!)
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Post by Raika on May 28, 2006 20:02:07 GMT -5
lol i love your title! its so cute! and so its the story!
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 31, 2006 11:20:19 GMT -5
Yeah the title is funny. Such an imagination! How in the world did you come up with this idea? I would have never thought of it!
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