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Post by Juxapose on May 3, 2009 2:34:56 GMT -5
I meant to say his eyes are as aqua as the ocean in the horizon.
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Post by Butterscotch on May 3, 2009 9:24:52 GMT -5
Oh okay!
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Post by Juxapose on Mar 13, 2012 16:17:41 GMT -5
It's been a while since I updated this story. I plan to post another chapter soon, but I have an announcement.
Even though I have already written the story on paper, I have recently re-read the fic, and was not satisfied with some of the content. Some of the chapters, especially towards the end were a bit farfetched, and seem to be excessively goofy. I will be rewriting the fic to be more like the game, but I will be starting from chapter 3. I will not change the first three chapters, but some chapters afterwards will have changed content. Although the changes will not be drastic, they will make more sense and more kanon to the story. After the fic is over, I will describe the changes, and you decide if the changes were needed, or should I have stuck to the original draft.
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