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Post by tootsieroll on Jun 9, 2009 5:40:34 GMT -5
yup. he laughs at my fics and stories. thats the reason for short chapters. sorry pickle. check military ranch for an apology. i'm trying to squeeze a little more chapters here before i begin military ranch again.
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Post by tootsieroll on Jul 16, 2009 21:37:00 GMT -5
The meeting went on and on and when the bell rung out, goddesses and gods flooded out of the stuffy room. There are a lot of gods that stay in the city hall and chat while attending to the food table. Cupid was one of those gods. He often stays and chats with Demeter while eating strawberry cereal.
"So how's the barley going, Mete's?" Cupid talked to the goddess across the table.
"Oh, it's fine" Demeter had another sip of her tea "People are asking for more malts though. Probably to serve their drunken pleasure"
"You got that right, Mete." Cupid then focused the topic on his job "Lot's of oppurtunities 'tis early spring. Valentine's just around the corner"
"I know how you feel. Do you know there's a Barley Day? It was just a few days ago. Lot's to attend to" Demeter checked the big wall clock "Oops, gotta go. Poseidon's gonna kill me if i don't attend to the kitchen soon"
Demeter then rushed off leaving Cupid alone. Cupid got up and went outside. He picked at the cloud flowers and greeted the other gods passing by. He went towards the Division.
The Division was the line that seperates the gods and human. Only the gods have the key to open it and lock it once more. They didn't want to risk leaving it open even if it is quite hard to find the entrance.
Cupid opened it and locked it once more and floated stealthily around the Forget-Me-Not Division. He searched for his friend and finally tracked him down at a nearby inn. Cupid flew through the window to Pierre's room which surprised Pierre.
"Gaaah!!!" Pierre gasped when cupid entered "Stay away from me you harbinger of evil!!!"
"Geez, i'm a harbinger of love you dum-dum. See the pretty li'l hearts!?!"
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Well that's the wrap of it. Next chapter soon!!!
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Post by Pickle on Jul 16, 2009 23:10:28 GMT -5
I need to get a story up somewhere. Ghost writing takes time.
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Post by tootsieroll on Jul 17, 2009 0:35:28 GMT -5
what? ghost writing? anyway, i thought there should be a connection with the gods here. kinda weird though. i really researched for gods of food. Demeter's the barley mother  |
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Post by Pickle on Jul 17, 2009 1:44:55 GMT -5
It's a term basicly where someone comes up with the idea or something, but someone else edits it. In my case, I'm re-writing something.
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Post by tootsieroll on Jul 17, 2009 2:28:08 GMT -5
what? what's wrong with my fic. don't worry. i really come up with great ideas but they come out in a way that don't really please people which means in english... I suck bwahahahaha!!!!
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Post by Pickle on Jul 17, 2009 4:56:53 GMT -5
There's nothing wrong with your fic...I didn't say there was...
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Post by tootsieroll on Jul 17, 2009 20:21:19 GMT -5
well, to me my grammar sucks and i'm all alone in my elemantary vocabulary... i don't really study for my quizzes you see  |
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