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Post by Butterscotch on Feb 3, 2006 23:48:14 GMT -5
Do the charatcers in my comic book talk the way real teenagers talk? I'm trying to avoid slang, so that it won't appear dated in a few years, but I'm not sure if they sound the way real kids talk.
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Post by pendulous threads on Feb 3, 2006 23:49:42 GMT -5
I think they do. I'm always walking around going, "Yeah, yeah, yeah" and complaining about jogging and stuff. Don't worry Butters! They sound like teens!
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Post by Butterscotch on Feb 3, 2006 23:57:25 GMT -5
Thanks girls ^-^
I'm trying to avoid that nasty habit that some writers have of trying too hard, wherein their characters either use random trendy slang or sound like adults.
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Post by pendulous threads on Feb 4, 2006 0:02:16 GMT -5
Well, you're not using slang or talking like adults. It sounds like normal teen girls to me. Good work, Butters!
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Post by Butterscotch on Feb 4, 2006 0:05:50 GMT -5
Thanks! ^^
And please let me know if they ever don't sound right to you.
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Post by pendulous threads on Feb 4, 2006 0:10:58 GMT -5
Okay, I will. You can count on me! *Salutes Butters* Okay...I'm getting a little off-topic. Sorry. -_-'
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Post by Akane on Feb 4, 2006 18:30:33 GMT -5
Sounds real enough to me. ^_^
Just one thing, but I know you've already heard it. The 'babies' thing.
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Post by Butterscotch on Feb 4, 2006 18:34:54 GMT -5
What about it?
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Post by Akane on Feb 5, 2006 16:25:23 GMT -5
Would a man actually call dogs 'babies'? To me, I just can't see it...
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Post by Butterscotch on Feb 5, 2006 16:35:12 GMT -5
This man would
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Post by BorderWolf on Feb 5, 2006 17:23:34 GMT -5
Some men do, some also call their pets, " my children ".
Edit.: Just remembered, did you ever see the 1st Superman movie? Lex Luthor asked Otis, " Did you feed the babies? " ( meaning his pet lions. )
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Post by Akane on Feb 5, 2006 21:17:43 GMT -5
I don't watch Superman.
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Post by BorderWolf on Feb 6, 2006 20:30:06 GMT -5
I don't watch Superman. You never saw the movie that stared Christopher Reeves?
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Post by Butterscotch on Feb 6, 2006 22:23:34 GMT -5
I don't watch Superman. You never saw the movie that stared Christopher Reeves? Neither have I.
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Post by Kamichama Karin on Feb 19, 2006 13:13:11 GMT -5
neither have i
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