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Post by Coco on Nov 4, 2007 20:02:53 GMT -5
I have already posted the first chapter but I feel as if it is lacking something. I have the next chapter on the way but I have a feeling if I dont get a major plot that I will not continue it. Can someone read it and give me a few ideas? Its called The Witch of Flowerbud Village.
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Post by Pickle on Nov 5, 2007 8:11:00 GMT -5
....Make it about a chicken.
See above? That was sarcaism.
But seriously, the title is the Witch of Flowerbud Village.
I would assume that the story would include the witch of Flowerbud.
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Post by Coco on Nov 5, 2007 23:42:44 GMT -5
....Make it about a chicken. See above? That was sarcaism. But seriously, the title is the Witch of Flowerbud Village. I would assume that the story would include the witch of Flowerbud. I am wondering... But the title is actually the truth. there is an actual witch. (magic, spells, voodoo) that sort of thing. I am trying to brainstorm some plots but no such luck  |
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Post by Pickle on Nov 6, 2007 13:59:01 GMT -5
Why not, like problems the witch is causing or some sort of moral lesson or weird stuff happens so they have to seek out the witch or kill the witch or it can be a ghost or something or maybe they think there is a witch but it's not really her, it turns out to be someone else or pull a venom and have the witch accidently die while she was trying to get rid of an evil artifact and then the villagers have to fight against the evil, like zombies.
...Does that help?
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Post by Coco on Nov 6, 2007 21:58:43 GMT -5
Why not, like problems the witch is causing or some sort of moral lesson or weird stuff happens so they have to seek out the witch or kill the witch or it can be a ghost or something or maybe they think there is a witch but it's not really her, it turns out to be someone else or pull a venom and have the witch accidently die while she was trying to get rid of an evil artifact and then the villagers have to fight against the evil, like zombies. ...Does that help? Wow! That opens my mind a whole lot! I would have never thought of things like that. But I think I will have her be like secretive about it and then her secret gets out. Maybe I will add some romance to the story to make it seem more interesting. |
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Post by Pickle on Nov 6, 2007 22:44:57 GMT -5
Good luck to you.
You know, your beginging was quite well written. I'm surprised you did not think beyond it.
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Post by Coco on Nov 21, 2007 19:29:52 GMT -5
I was thinking, I am sort of lacking interest in writing my story. I wanted to get some opinions on a new one. I was thinking which game I wanted to base it on first though. Which one of these would you guys find interesting:
FoMT
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AWL
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MM
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HM:64
I want to make a story that people will actually want to read. So help me out please!
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Post by BorderWolf on Nov 22, 2007 4:40:19 GMT -5
Your current one is great! Please continue it.
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Post by zero on Nov 22, 2007 17:37:37 GMT -5
I heard HM: DS is the sequel to AWL cause it takes place 100 years after the ending of AWL.
So....try for AWL fic.
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Post by Coco on Nov 22, 2007 17:48:36 GMT -5
Hmm, AWL is a challenging game to base a story on since there is no real dramatic issues and not that many characters...but I am always up for a challenge.  See Zero! I am having a positive attitude *folds arms and nods head reasurringly* |
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Post by zero on Nov 22, 2007 17:51:22 GMT -5
Keep thinking that way -_-
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Post by Coco on Nov 22, 2007 18:06:25 GMT -5
wait are you being sarcastic? No im j/k. I will but what should be the title. I was thinking of "Karma" but thats more of a FOMT title....
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Post by zero on Nov 22, 2007 18:13:21 GMT -5
AWL is more like "The Choices We Make"
that's an excellent title for it.
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Post by Coco on Nov 22, 2007 18:23:55 GMT -5
Hmm, but thats your title, you should use it I will come up with something like that.
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Post by zero on Nov 22, 2007 18:25:59 GMT -5
If I do it, it might end up the title of two fics. don't worry, just take it. I don't mind. |
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See Zero! I am having a positive attitude *folds arms and nods head reasurringly*