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Post by zero on Dec 1, 2007 23:45:43 GMT -5
Alright, chapter 6 is almost done.
Gray cares more about Mary than anybody knows, and he'll fight Lee in order for this new guy to stay away from the girl he loves.
What will Lee's reaction be, and will it connect with the reflection he saw in the water a few chapters ago?
Keep reading and fine out.
Bonus Hint: You'll see that Lee is not all that he seems to be, even with amnesia.
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Post by zero on Dec 7, 2007 21:14:14 GMT -5
Forgive the double posting mods.
Alright, to the faithful that will continue to read Berserker Hero, here is updated info. I'm gonna throw in plenty of loops to make it as long as possible, but not unbelivable.
There are times where everyone goes to a different village closer to a beach during the summer, and a nearby castle town will hold many answer, as well as a few secrets to Lee's life.
Also. those who want to know about Lee's past more, you'll see it, in the form of a person along with his memories.
Those who want to see more fights, I have a bandit raid coming soon.
For the romance ones, I've decided that during all relationship enhancing chapters, I will put in appropriate song lyrics to make things seem more romantic and magical.
For example Boys Like Girls: Top of the World Boys Like Girls: Thunder
I will occasionally put in songs on nonromantic chapters, but it will involve character development.
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Post by Butterscotch on Dec 7, 2007 21:44:24 GMT -5
Ehh...putting song lyrics in fanfics is a bad idea. It only works if the reader is familiar with the song, and even then it may not work. Song lyrics don't read the same as poetry, the flow is different. Find a song lyric site, and try reading the lyrics of a song you've never heard and see what I mean. I've read, I think, one fanfic that used song lyrics well. It was an Aladdin fanfic, and the author opened and closed each chapter with new, orginal lyrics for Arabian Nights. It worked since everyone who would be reading an Alladin fic would know how Arabian Nights sounds.
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Post by zero on Dec 7, 2007 21:46:56 GMT -5
True. That's good advice.
Though if anybody watches MTV, Boys Like Girls have been seen on like every commerical for the past week or month. Either way, its a popular band.
I'll put up a beta chapter and see how it works before anything serious, how does that sound?
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Post by Butterscotch on Dec 7, 2007 21:50:58 GMT -5
Never heard of 'em. And since when does MTV play music? XP
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Post by zero on Dec 7, 2007 21:53:56 GMT -5
They are a very good band. I suggest you listen to them sometime. Look them up.
My recommended songs Top of the World Holiday Heels Over Head(Head over Heels? I forgot. sorry) Hero/Heroine
check out cdzinc.com for their music video. Click on B and scroll down till you find them.
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