Should I go for this?

[zero]

I already have a few HM fics in the making, but seeing as how action/adventure is more down my alley, here's an AU HM fic I came up with. Tell me if I should write this,

The world is filled with two kinds of humans. Most of the humans wouldn't harm a fly, and they farm, trade, and band together to survive. The other kind of human, are berserkers. These people have the ability to change into half-human, half-creature beings when they are enraged, and they mostly hunt and wander to survive. They usually hate everything and do whatever they want without permission.

When a Lone berserker(in human form) is found outside a small town badly injured, he is raised back to health by three of the village's most sought after bachelorettes. When he wakes up, he wishes to repay the favor, he ends up trying to work a farm back to its former glory after its original owner passed away, while trying to earn the villagers trust, and the love of the bachelorettes.

Just when he finally seems to be doing a good job, bad things start to happen. A group of evil men come to the village and start bossing everyone around and hurting everyone. The berseker, who is unusually calm for his kind, does nothing until one day when he's getting a drink, overhears a plan for the evil men to rape one of the girls who helped him.

Embracing his berserker blood, he goes on a rampage and kills them when they go outside of town.

Although their deaths are called a mystery, a few people wonder who the berserker really is. That's when another berserker comes to town and starts random killings in the hero's name(hero being the berserker that was saved). Slowly, the whole village isolates him, until its just him, and the one woman who stayed by his side since day 1.

Deciding to end everything here and now, the hero berserker goes to confront the one who's really killing everybody. WHen they meet, the girl the hero loves is injured, and she sees him become a berserker to fight back and protect her.

Will he succeed and save her, or will his berserker blood control him, and he slowly goes down the path of evil?

[Coco]

This sounds like a really good story. I hope you consider of making it and hopefully everyone else feel the same way. You have a very creative mind.

[zero]

thanks. I'll try after I get some more work done on my other fic.

[Butterscotch]

The premise is pretty interesting, but in all honesty, AU fics tend to make me a bit wary. When well-done, they can be awesome, but they can also be crap. With a few tweaks, it could actually be a completly orginal story (which is true of many AU's)

Will he succeed and save her, or will his berserker blood control him, and he slowly goes down the path of evil?

This part intrigues me most; it seems to have lots of room for character development.

If you decide to go the AU path, tread carefully. It might be in your best interest to write it all out from beginning to end before posting it, or at least have it fully plotted

[zero]

Thanks for the advice. AU fics are very hard to do the right way, I've seen the ones that have had success and failure.

Well, here are some quotes from the fic
(Kami no Rai- God of Lightning)
"Why can't I remember anything?"

"A berserker....is nothing but a murderer. Who loves to kill."

"No. That isn't true. It's human nature that drives us to kill. If anything, we've only killed in self defense."

"You are the death god that is infamous all over the world."

"All I am, is what you see in front of you."

"Did you really think you could kill the Kami no Rai* that way?"

"Fool! Attack here and we'll both die!"

"I don't care! I WILL PROTECT THOSE I CARE ABOUT EVEN AFTER DEATH!"

[zero]

Alright, here is a pictures of the main character, Lee. He is the Hero Berserker

This was when he was a kid



and as he is in the actual fic

Berserker mode



Human form

[Deniz :]]]]

^ omg I saw an edited Sasuke - kun picture <3
Yep you should defenitly right the story I know I'd read it ^_^

[zero]

I'll try to, after I do that request for Butterscotch

[zero]

Alright, here's a little mini poll while I write some later chapters.

WHO SHOULD LEE END UP WITH?

MARY

GWEN

HARVEST GODDESS

The decision will heavily influence later chapters that deal with romance, and the ending.

[Butterscotch]

Doesn't Mary, like, die in the prolouge?

[zero]

No. She was badly injured, dying, but she can make it.

So, please make your vote.
Note that if its a tie, both girls will end up with him. Harder to make it work, but I'm not doing tiebreakers.

[Banika Conchita]

^ =O that manwhore!

[Butterscotch]

It's your fic; write it the way you want

[zero]

yeah, I know, but I don't feel like doing different chapters for different girls because I don't know who to go with.

[Coco]

Just pick one. Personally I think Gwen. Mary seems like the girl that everyone would like to have with the main character....also, when are you going to continue your other fic?