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Post by zero on Feb 25, 2008 18:30:25 GMT -5
Thinking Time!
Here's something I've wanted to do since seeing Devil May Cry 4's Nero.
Make a story involving an arm similar to Nero's demonic arm.
This is what I got. I just want opinions on if this plot is good or not.
In today's world, nightmares are a lot more than they seem. They're visions of the future. A portal to the demonic realm. Few can do anything to stop the nightmares. Espically in the city of Kyoto, full of those rich in the sixth sense. For centuries, the demons did nothing, content with causing chaos and mayhem in their own realm.
Then one of them decided to break out.
Soon, many other followed, and people across the world began having a mass breakout of nightmares. With them, demons came out. At first, nobody noticed, then those with the gift of 'sight'(sixth sense) began to fight back. With the help of many comrades, the demons were pushed back.
That was 20 years ago.
Now, a teenage boy has a nightmare. One more costly than any other. Cause in this one, he wasn't dreaming it, he was living it! A giant demon, gifted with strength beyond the normal realms tries to escape to the human world from this boy's mind. However, the boy fights back, and in the process loses an arm. However, it unleashes the gift of his other arm.
And he discovers that he isn't as human as he once thought.
His left arm glowed an ungodly white, and it.......morphed. Skin became scales, fingers turned into claws. His arm became a demonic weapon. With it, he thrusts through the strength demon and absorbs it. His gift is to make sure demons don't cause havoc with his left arm, and to see the truth through his eyes.
However, as time passes, demons grow more cunning and bold. One arm won't be enough to stop them. Probably not even 2.
But he has to fight......cause a fate much bigger than the world's lies on his shoulders.........
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Post by Butterscotch on Feb 25, 2008 20:46:23 GMT -5
The concept sounds pretty cool, but why does it have to be set in Japan? Couldn't it be set in America or Canada or wherever it is you live?
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Post by Dragonic Darkness on Feb 25, 2008 20:59:29 GMT -5
How about Mexico and have him travel across the world? Btw, Nero is awsome. Dante's still a personal favorite though. =/
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Post by zero on Feb 25, 2008 22:12:03 GMT -5
actually, it only starts off in Japan. He later moves to America, Los Angeles if you wanna get specific. Then he stays in England for a bit, before going back to Japan.
Along the way, he gets a new right arm, mechanical. It's powerful, made from holy silver, and has pistons and engines inside it that can have him punch with the force of a blue whale slamming into you, or throwing out multitudes of punches at once at high speeds. Using it too much overloads the arm and he can't use it for a few hours till it cools down.
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Post by Pickle on Mar 13, 2008 11:08:21 GMT -5
No, you need it in a middle of no where places.
Like...INDIA! DO IT IN INDIA!
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