Marvel Hero Idea

[zero]

My friend and I spent months working on this Hero. I was inspired to create him when reading the Civil War event, my friend liked the idea and helped me in creating him. We're geeks to be sure, and if you don't know anything about Marvel Comics, you're better off not reading this.

This is EVERYTHING we thought up. It's open to suggestions, but NO flames or complaints.

Marvel Hero: Alloy
Created by: Eric Class, Christian Sanchez
Copyright to him is ours as of 2007

Name: Eric 'Zero' Sanchez-Sekihara (his parents kept their last names when they married, but he uses Sekihara officially.)
Age: 17
Nationality: Japanese-American
Kind of Hero: Techno-Hero, uses special armor to fight
Abilities of Armor:
• Enhances physical aspects x12

• The armor can shape shift into any weapon Eric thinks of, and the armor will change to the specifications. (Note: The armor will not come off of Eric and make him vulnerable. Eric must be thinking of a perfect picture of the weapon for the armor to change. He can also use this ability to glide out of areas by thinking of growing wings.) When in times of critical danger, the suit will automatically make a defensive weapon or wings so Eric can avoid a potentially fatal sneak attack.

• The armor's range when using bullets from the armor itself is 200 yards. When compressed into a sniper rifle shot, it can go 10-20 times the normal distance.

• The armor can withstand pressure TO A POINT, and can filter dangerous gases or provide oxygen to Eric when going into gas filled areas, or into space. Also, the suit can withstand extreme climates FOR A LIMITED TIME as well.

• The armor can protect Eric from psi-blasts and lesser forms of magic, weapons, and other things that could be used to hurt him.

• Without the armor, Eric knows a moderate amount of kendo, martial arts, and other forms of self defense. His mental aspects are high, and he is highly advanced in science, physics, math, literature, and history. Physical aspects are above average.

Weakness: The armor can be hurt, but not destroyed, by vibranium and adamantium. The armor also doesn't protect from strong psychic, or mind blasts. The suit is vulnerable to electricity and magnetism. Can't stand in extreme climates too long, can't withstand major pressure for too long.

Things to note: Eric is nicknamed 'Zero' for his obsession with the character from the Megaman X series: Zero.

Appearance: Black hair dyed blue, short and spiky by using hair gel and getting hair cuts often, blue eyes, likes to wear white shirts, jeans, and blue and white sneakers. He also likes to wear anime shirts as well. Has an Ipod on him often with earphones, and listening to rock music when it is on him.

Villains: Dr. Doom, Electro, Magneto, etc. (Original Villains will be left to Marvel's Imagination, but we hope it includes a magician/superthief

Allies (occasionally): Spider-Man, Wolverine, some of the X-men, the underground resistance to the Hero act, Doc Strange.

Origin of suit: This suit was originally made on another planet. Originally, it was to be used as a device to explore new places; however, the planet was destroyed not too long after it was made during a war. The armor was locked in an escape pod, where it crash landed on earth. It was found and modified by S.H.I.E.L.D. and was to be used as a weapon during the Civil War between Captain America's troops and Iron Man's troops, on Iron Mans side.

How Eric found the suit: During a trip to the Grand Canyon in Arizona for his World History class, the charter bus for his class had broken down. The students were allowed to wander so long as they didn't go too far, but Eric disobeyed that rule and went anyways. After walking for hours on end, just getting lost on purpose, he found an abandoned base, not knowing it belonged to S.H.I.E.L.D. He went inside the base and after searching around for a little while, he saw a metal orb sitting on top of a pedestal. He touched it, and it glowed, after which he passed out and woke up back on the bus which was just fixed. Nobody had noticed he left or came back on the bus.

How Eric first used the suit: While taking a walk near the Golden Gate Bridge, he saw a bunch of psychopaths on top of the railings with enough TNT strapped on them to take out a good chunk of the bridge, and plenty of innocent people with it. He thought to stay out of it, until he noticed his mother's car was on the bridge, with her and his little sister trapped inside it. Thinking of only wanting to save him, he jumped to try and beat the crap out of them, not knowing until the last second his jump brought him right up to their level and he was covered from head to toe in a metallic armor. He had no time to stop and wondered what happened, and proceeded to beat the criminals and take out the TNT before dumping it into the sea around the bridge. Not knowing when the armor would come off, he jumped, and the armor sprouted a pair of metallic wings when he forgot he couldn't fly and he glided safely to the ground, where people proceeded to call the police and tell them an unregistered superhero appeared on the bridge.

Why Dr. Doom and Magneto want the suit: They both want to know just where in the universe, maybe galaxy, the suit had come from. They are interested about why the suit was so versatile, able to produce weapons based only on thought, and how it adapted to situations very well. They also wanted to use it as a weapon of mass destruction since it seemed near invincible and could repair itself from injuries.

Eric's love interest: A Japanese girl in his classes named Miko Arien. She has long black hair, almond brown eyes, a figure that centers mostly on the bust and hips, and dresses like the popular girl she is. She is 5'9" and along with being popular, is very smart. She was at one point in their childhood Eric's best friend, till she became popular and left him behind. Though she regrets doing that to him, her life prevents her from telling him how bad she felt and how much she actually liked him. Her friends keep trying to hook her up with jocks.

Eric's family: Eric's dad is the blond haired, blue eyed typical American guy. He is a white collar business man, and very well respected. He's often away from home, but he loves to spend every minute he can with his family. His name is Michael Sanchez, and he's 47 years old and is 5'11".

Eric's mother is a Japanese woman of above average beauty. She has a slim but fit figure, which is good since she is a model. Her hair is short and pitch black in color, as are her irises are emerald green. She likes to read in her spare time and is very devoted to her daughter, not so much to Eric. She is 5'10" and 40 years old. Her name is Keiko Sekihara.

Eric's little sister is Japanese-American like him. She hero-worships her older brother and wants to be more like him when she grows up. She has blond hair and blue eyes like her father, but has her mothers face. Her hair is often tied in pigtails and she loves to wear orange, pink, or green. She is 4'6" and 10 years old. Her name is Sarah Sanchez-Sekihara, but prefers to use her dad's last name.

[Butterscotch]

There's a lot of cool premises in here. I do have a few suggestions

The armor's powers seem cool, but maybe a bit much. Toning them down, or having Eric struggle to learn the armor's powers over time would be a bit more interesting, I think. I'm leaning towards the second one as I think about it.

Also, while I understand that you want Dr. Doom and Magneto involved, I suggest thinking of a few orginal villains. Kind of like, he's fighting his own bad guys for a while, and gradually attract the attention of bigger villains. That way it doesn't seem like this kid came out of nowhere, ya know?

anyway, good luck!

[zero]

actually, these were toned down, and we never said he knew how to use them. We just stated what the powers were. Same for the villains, we never stated when they'd notice him, but they will fight at one point in time.

As for original villains, we couldn't think up of much, but one idea we had was a magician/superthief.

[Butterscotch]

zero said:

actually, these were toned down, and we never said he knew how to use them. We just stated what the powers were. Same for the villains, we never stated when they'd notice him, but they will fight at one point in time.

Cool; I'm glad you already thought of that. It was hard to tell from your post if he had all those powers and bad guys right off the start or not.

Don't get me wrong, I think the premise is cool, I'm just throwing in my two cents.

[zero]

I think we covered more or less everything needed.

[Pickle]

Wee! Marvel is always fun.

BTW, you want me to make you a villain? Thanks to several Suikoden boards, I've become quite experienced about making bios (I use to make shop NPCs). And I know magical crap. Though off topic...how big of a fan of Megaman are you?

[zero]

I love megaman. If you looked at the things to note, my characters nickname is actually Zero from the X series.