Breann-Chan
Large Milk
Shiki Senri Fan [M:2]
Shiki Senri= Total love
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Post by Breann-Chan on May 15, 2008 19:25:36 GMT -5
Summary: Jill took over her dead fathers farm in forget-me-not valley. When she is there she meets Skye. A young thief, who is surprisingly gorgeous. How will she cope, not just with being in love with a thief, but with her brother watching her every move?
Plots: There are two plots. Her love for Skye and Her brother. I'm currently working on the first right now. -.-.-.- Prologue It has been about a year and a half since I moved to forget -me-not- valley, and about a year and half since I’ve met him.
With his beautiful silver hair and shining green eyes, it was no wonder why girls naturally like him, and fall in love with him. But me, I thought I was stronger, stronger then the others to fall in love with him. I try to convince myself, but to no avail.
I was just a simple farm girl, I had it set. I inherited my deceased late fathers farm. And I had a plan. A plan to marry a hot country man, have 2 children, ensure the success of my farm . He was definitely not part of my plan.
But what can I say. I cant control who I love. My heart decides it; Not me. Even if I ,Jill Harvest, could choose one of the local men, my heart would still beat for him.
But is it okay? A farmer marrying a Thief? Not just a Thief, The Thief. Phantom Thief Skye? Why does my heart beat so fast, how did I fall in love with him, a thief? Only the past can tell, the secrets of my heart. -.-.-.- Tell me what you think. If you like it I will post the first three chapters up shortly.
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Post by Juxapose on May 15, 2008 19:53:57 GMT -5
Please do post the first chapter.
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Breann-Chan
Large Milk
Shiki Senri Fan [M:2]
Shiki Senri= Total love
Posts: 260
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Post by Breann-Chan on May 15, 2008 19:59:08 GMT -5
Sure... -.-.- Welcome to the valley!
The spring breeze hit my brown hair as I looked around me. The valley was huge, not as big as the city but still huge. I could tell it was spring by the trees blooming, all around me. It was such a beautiful sight.
Wow. This was amazing. To understand how truly beautiful it was, you had to be there.
As if by an impulse my plan replayed over and over again. The plan that had gotten me through high school. My plan was simple, but it involved stuff most people didn’t find possible. Like Finding a farm, where there was no machines. I wanted to live as my ancestors had, like my father…
When I got the letter last winter, I cried my eyes out. The letter was from a friend of my father, Takakura. I still remember those spring and summer days where I would play with him on my fathers farm. He was like a friend I couldn’t replace.
Anyway, the letter had stated that my Late father died of natural causes. It also stated that I was next in line for the farm. When I read it I was sad, but happy at the same time. My plan was going to go into full effect.
Granted, I wasn’t very close to my father. But he was my only family left, other then my brother Jack, who is the Rancher in Mineral Town.
My mother had died of a mysterious cause and it is still being investigated to this day. I was only ten at the time so it was like I had lost my other half. She had been so kind to me, and when I had asked about my father, she told me all about him.
As I stated before my brother is a Rancher at Mineral town. I had stayed with him for two weeks. When I had shown him the letter, he cried as well. He was closer to Dad, because he lived closer and stayed in touch. It hurt me to see him so depressed, so I help out with the daily chores.
A week later, I set out to where I am now, forget-me-not. And now, as I see the wide open plains I sense that I will like it, no LOVE it here.
This is the best…
As the wind blows again over my face, I turn and begin to walk. I see a farm, with turnips. It looks very well managed. I smile at the crops. Planting was my favorite. I love all kinds of vegetables. I look around once again and continue to walk.
The day is Spring 1st., the one day my true life will begin. I start to pick up pace and run around the valley, at least how far my 21 year old self would allow. I begin giggling, not realizing my surroundings. I hadn’t been here in more than 19 years, so I didn’t recognize it.
When I looked up I saw a tree. Not just a tree, the biggest tree I have ever seen! It was looming over a pond and half the place, seeming to be like a king to the area, like it was in charge. It looks so magnificent, with flowers in full bloom, probably getting ready to supply summer fruit. I thought of all the fruit it would supply when I heard a voice behind me.
When I turned around I saw a most beautiful sight. There standing, barely 3 feet away, was a girl looking barely 18. Her brown eyes, stood frozen on mine, scanning me to see if she knew me. A sudden gust of wind sent her short cinnamon colored hair swaying. She put a hair band in her hair to stop the sway, maybe if it only may be a bit.
When she realized she didn’t recognize me, her face turned to a smile. My face, of course, stayed the same; surprised, by the sudden appearance of a person. And not just that! She seemed so refined, so lady like! It kind of scared me a bit.
She extended her hand, possibly for a hand shake. I noticed how small, and pale, her hand was. But that wasn’t what caught my attention., the diamond rings, with…with so much gold!
She caught me looking at them and gasped. I jumped because of the suddenness.
“Oh, I’m sorry! I didn’t mean to frighten you”, she smiled taking her hand back. “I haven’t seen you around here before. Are you just visiting?” She put a lose lock of her hair behind her ear.
I moved my head back and forth, no I now lived here…
She looks at me, sadness for something I don’t know, in her eyes. “You know, you remind me of him…”, she sighed. She turned around and looked at the river on the other side of the field.
“Come, I’ll bring you to my home and we shall talk”, at this she beckoned me towards her with her hand.
When we exited the field, or rather the goddess pond as I was told, we stopped in front of a mansion. I could see the wonderful structure and craftsman ship. The doors itself, must have cost a fortune. The girl caught me gasping.
“How rude of me, I forgot to mention my name. My name is Lumina, I am the granddaughter of the owner of this mansion”, she smiled, her white teeth showing. She looked at me, expectantly…
“Uhm, my name is Jill”, I said as Lumina picked up a put with a flower in it, “Jill Harvest”
Crash!
I looked over to where Lumina was, eyes wide. “H-Harvest?!”
I looked at her like she was mental. “Uhm, ya. My father owned the farm till recently.”
She moved her head back and forth. “Come…”, she said grabbing my shirt and pulled me toward my farm.
When we arrived I noticed that the field was in ruins. I let out a gasp as she looked at me. She sighed and knocked on a door, and then when he came out, it was him. Takakura.
“Ms. Lumina why are yo-”, he said being cut off when he saw me. His old haggard face turned sympathetic. “Jill…”
I nodded my head and crashed right into him, hugging him with such force. I never wanted this moment to stop. It was probably the best moment of my life.
He pushed me back a bit, and sighed. “I will talk to later, Lumina talk to her please, about her father.” He then went back to his house, sighing and mumbling some stuff I couldn’t hear.
“So that’s what happened to your father”, Lumina said rather-a-factly . I sighed and turned to a clock on Lumina’s bed side table. 10:30... I better head home.
I yawn and wave good bye to Lumina. And as soon as I leave the mansion, I see him. Yes, Skye. Him.
When I saw him in the moonlight I thought he was just an illusion, but once he spotted me, he started talking.
“Why hello there, maiden!”, he said flirting with me. I glared at him… but my heart, it wouldn’t stop beating.
“H-hey…”, I say. “Who are you?”
He chuckled and flipped some of his hair away. Obviously he thought that was going to turn me on. Two words. Ya right.
“Skye, yours fair maiden?”, he asked. I chuckled.
“Uhm, aren’t you a woman?”, I asked jokingly. He cringed at this.
“No im not, a women”, he sighed. “Your name?”, he repeated again.
“Jill…”, I said.
“Jill, what a lovely name for a lovely maiden”, he chuckled. “I must say farewell for now, but look out for me. Phantom Thief Skye!” Then, he ran away. Into the darkness and away… wait? Did he say thief? Oh my Goddess, did I just get hit on by a thief?
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Post by Pickle on May 15, 2008 22:25:59 GMT -5
And here I go, asking questions becauswe I know nothing: Which game is this from?
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Breann-Chan
Large Milk
Shiki Senri Fan [M:2]
Shiki Senri= Total love
Posts: 260
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Post by Breann-Chan on May 16, 2008 5:18:54 GMT -5
DS Cute. ^^;
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Post by May on May 16, 2008 6:31:37 GMT -5
Holy crap, that was weird. I just read this on FF.net, and now it's posted here. Anyway, good job so far ^.^
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Breann-Chan
Large Milk
Shiki Senri Fan [M:2]
Shiki Senri= Total love
Posts: 260
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Post by Breann-Chan on May 16, 2008 12:03:51 GMT -5
xD Thanks. Lol. Yes I posted it on FF first. ^^;
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Post by nienor52 on May 23, 2008 21:27:17 GMT -5
WOW.....I love it! Skye is my favorite character.
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Post by Juxapose on May 24, 2008 13:45:47 GMT -5
Great first chapter. I did get lost now and then, why is Jill acting like she also fell for Lumina AND Takakura?
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Breann-Chan
Large Milk
Shiki Senri Fan [M:2]
Shiki Senri= Total love
Posts: 260
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Post by Breann-Chan on May 24, 2008 21:08:26 GMT -5
Uhm, I dont know why. Takakura is like an Uncle to her. Lumina is her new best friend.... xD
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Post by jennstar97 on Jun 4, 2008 17:00:01 GMT -5
Good job
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Post by oopsi8everest on Jun 14, 2008 10:20:33 GMT -5
I like it. When are you going to post the next chappie?
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