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Post by ~Rosie~ on Jun 1, 2009 20:24:58 GMT -5
Turn around my sweet, for your soul mate shall you meet. A voice whispered in my head. I turned slowly around to see a silver haired man standing behind me, his green eyes meeting mine. Great, not again... I thought, frustrated.
"What do you want, Skye?" I asked him in an annoyed tone. Ever since the first night we met, this thief, Skye, has been trying to steal my heart away. But my heart belongs to no one, nor will it ever.
"Can't I come and see my lovely on a beautiful night like this?" He asked me seductively, pouting a bit.
"No, besides, how did you find me?! We're on at the top of the waterfall!" I snapped at Skye. I mean seriously! I don't think he's so desperate to start stalking me!
"I followed you here! Now, why don't you get over here into my arms?" He said as if actually stalking me was no big deal.
I actually kind of felt sorry for him. I mean, he was a major flirt, but... he says I'm the first girl he's ever loved. He told me his story, which was pretty sad. He lost both his parents by someone murdering them, and he was left with nothing. So that's how he got into thievery, that's how he made his money.
i sighed. "Skye, you know I can't return the love you fee for me... I- I just can't. I want to... i really do..." I lied, I don't even like him in a friendly way! He is so annoying. But, hey, the gentler the rejection, the less they'll hate you.
"Don't say that, Claire. You know someday I will steal you're heart and we'll get married!" He said optimistically. There's just no stopping him.
"UGH! Don't you unerstand, Skye? I want to be ALONE!" I blew up at him, finally giving up. "You are so annoying! You are frustrating...and irresponsible.. and horrible! You just don't understand me, do you! I'm not some girly-girl like Muffy who you can sweep her off her feet! it takes actual work to get me to even be friendly! So just go away!!!" I screamed at him. I hated to be so rude, but he's just so...
"I-I see... I'll leave now..." I heard Skye say in a shocked voice which turned to sorrow and defeat. "Bye..." he said, then left... and that's the last I've ever heard of him...
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So yeah I know it's not very good, but I just sort of did this prt of the story off of a whim, cuz I just got the idea. The other parts wil be better written though! c&c but no flaming please!
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Post by Skittles on Jun 2, 2009 15:47:15 GMT -5
I think it's good
Can't wait for the next part!
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Post by Pickle on Jun 3, 2009 21:12:29 GMT -5
Spaces would help.
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