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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 14, 2005 21:39:50 GMT -5
That's what I was thinking...you scare me!  Lol... OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG *HEART ATTACK* I was just typing it on my webstie and I accidently erased all the half of a chapter! NNNNNNNOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *SMACKS SELF A GAZILLION TIMES!* |
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 14, 2005 21:50:08 GMT -5
NO! IT WILL NEVER BE BETTER! *SOBS* Thanks for trying though... *SOBS!* THIS IS WORSE THAN KILLING THE PERSON I DON'T WANT TO KILL! *SOBS* *SMACKS SELF* IDIOT!
Wow...never anger me...really...don't...this is a warning for your safety. I am seriously this angry. *takes in deep breath* Must stay calm...*Smacks head on a pole outside...* .............ow.............. that's better...............
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 14, 2005 22:04:32 GMT -5
*SMACKS WALL REPEATEDLY* OMG! I SMACKED IT SO HARD MY HAND CAME OFF!
Lol, wow...too much sugar...I'm still mad though...good thing I almost caught up to where I was at...
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 15, 2005 6:08:07 GMT -5
WAHOO! 2 hour delay for school! *Dances aroundd her room and then hits a pole* GAH! Stupid pole...Why do I always do that?
Anyways, I'm not going to school until like...12:00 since I have an appointment at 10:00! So, I am going to write more! YAY! I mean...*sobs*
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 15, 2005 7:29:26 GMT -5
Here is more...this is for you guys Zac and Melody! You better be happy! It's not a good chapter considering my mind was off in space rather than focused on the story. Plus...I'm trying to make it bearable for melody.
Chapter Eight: Dad's Depression
"Brandon...it was horrible!" I cried out. "It is Richards fault! That bastard...it's all his fault! I'm going to get him for this! I swear it!" Brandon patted my back.
"It's okay Melanie. What happened exactly?" he asked soothingly.
The story surprisingly poured out of my mouth quickly. It sounded like something out of a movie...something you would never dream of happening. But it did. It did. Brandon pursed his lips together tightly and tried not to keep looking over at mother. Jon soon ran back to us, but where was dad?
"You're father..." Jon panted. "He won't come down. I talked to him about it, and he refuses to come down from the cliff!"
"Is he alright?" I asked. "Is he still crying?"
"Oh yeah, he was bawling his eyes out." Jon answered. "I could hardly understand what he was saying through his sobs. Maybe he would come down if you talked to him Melanie." It was a good idea. But could I really bear to see my father like this? So unhappy? My father that never cried...is bawling?
"I-I can't. I just can't." I whispered. "Maybe Brandon can." My brother sighed and got up from the ground.
"I'll be back!" he called as he started to run away. I nodded at him and just sat on the ground, trying to keep my mind blank. Sudden'y, I remembered what had happened the other night between Jon and I. I kept quiet, because I still didn't want to talk to him.
"A-Are you okay?" Jon asked, braking the silence between us. "Did Richard try to hurt you?"
"No, I'm fine." I answered stiffly. "He didn't want me. He only wanted...her." Jon's gaze was directed behind me at mother. I could see his face start to go pale. He quickly looked at the ground and shut his eyes. Brandon ran back to us.
"He won't listen to me! His own son!" Brandon yelled. "He just won't come down from the top of the mountain." I got up off the ground and started walking towards the top of the moutain. Why won't he come down? Mother was right when she always told me dad was stubourn. As he came into view my heart sank. Yes, really was bawling his eyes out.
"Dad." I said softly. I sat down beside him on the ground. "Dad, we need to go home. We need to tell some people what happened."
"No." he sobbed. That was all he said. I wrapped my arms around him and tried not to cry myself.
"Dad, please." I whispered. "You can't stay up here forever."
"Yes, I can." I said sternly. "I want to stay up here. I don't want to face the townspeople! All they will want is details! I just can't retell what happened! I CAN'T!" He started sobbing harder and I let go of him. He sunk onto his side on laid there with his hands over his face. Brandon looked about ready to cry too. Finally he did. He dropped to his knees and started bawling, just like dad. Trying not to cry, I remembered what mom said.
"Dad...mom wanted me to tell you that you were the only one she truly loved, and she loved you more than words can describe." I said softly. It was the wrong time to tell him...he started sobbing more violently, and it looked like he would never stop. "Brandon, mom wanted me to tell you to be good, and that she loved you." Brandon just acted like he didn't hear me. I heard voices of people coming up the mountain. It was Anna and Basil. Oh yeah, they come up here every Monday.
"Melanie, dear, what is wrong with your father?" Anna asked, walking over to me. She looked over at Brandon. "And your brother?"
"Nothing, Anna." I said softly. "If you don't mind, we would like to be alone." She nodded and her and Basil walked back down the mountain together. I tried to think of some way to get dad back to the house. "Dad, do you really want to stay up here? The very place mother was pushed off the cliff?"
"NO!" he yelled. He got up quickly and started down the mountain. I knew it hurt him when I talked about her...but it was the only way I could get him to go home! I followed him, leaving Brandon and Jon up there. They would be home soon. I'm not sure why I wasn't crying over mother myself.
"Dad? Do you want something to eat?" I asked as soon as I stepped in the house. I looked down at the ground, and there he sat, sobbing.
"I'm not hungry." he mumbled between sobs.
"Dad, you have to eat." I said. "You haven't had any food since yesterday. Aren't you at least going to have a sandwich?"
"I'm...not...hungry...." he repeated. "I'm not going to eat today. I'm just...not hungry." The more I thought about mother...the less hungry I got too.
"Why don't you get some rest then?" I suggested. I just hope he does something to make him stop crying. I can't stand to watch him for a long time. He got up off the ground and went over to the bed. He faced the wall, and I could see he was still crying. Not trying to sleep. I sighed.
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Post by ditzygrl911 on Dec 15, 2005 8:32:39 GMT -5
HAHA! CLIFF IS DEPRESSED! *Laughs evilly* The better thing than Cliff being depressed is that there is no school! AWESOME MAN! BTW Anna....you are so evil! YOU DON'T CARE THAT MY PRECIOUS TIM IS GOING OUT WITH THAT DEVIL IN MOB OF MEN!? HOW DARE YOU!? And my poor Kakashi...PLEASE DON'T DIE! I hate the Evil Dude... but he does have a nice six pack...Lol, he's lumpy, Anna.
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 15, 2005 8:40:19 GMT -5
It's not good that he is depressed Mia! If you keep saying mean things about Cliff I will KILL Tim. *Snickers* Oh yeah about Kakashi...DIE DIE DIE! Lol, I'm just kidding. I hope he doesn't die. Lol...the Evil Dude is lumpy...? Oh yeah...I remember now...Lol. Remember the picture I saw that I told you about? Kakashi having a six pack? Lol...I was looking for a picture for you! Gosh...I didn't want to see him with a six pack...although...I wish the guys at our school had six packs. ^_^
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Post by ditzygrl911 on Dec 15, 2005 8:43:35 GMT -5
.......................^^ *Drools*
Yeah, you still have to show me the picture Saturday. Thanks for making me the picture of Kakashi. IT WAS SO CUTE! ^^
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 15, 2005 8:50:26 GMT -5
Lol, okay I will show it to you. Remind me to do that. I don't want to take the time to do it right now. ^_^ Homework from yesterday is my main problem...
And, you're welcome...I thought it was quite funny. ^_^
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Post by Firehead on Dec 15, 2005 16:39:30 GMT -5
Wow, that was incredible. To good for words.......
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 15, 2005 18:52:01 GMT -5
Are you serious? Really? Well...thanks. Wow, I never really thought it was thsat good...thanks.
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Post by Firehead on Dec 15, 2005 19:03:28 GMT -5
It was awesome!
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 15, 2005 20:32:50 GMT -5
Thanks...this next chapter...oh man...I don't want to write it...
Well, I better get writing!
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 16, 2005 7:16:37 GMT -5
Oh, okay. Well maybe I won't just make it bearable for you. *sniff* Me too.
*Chugs some M.D.* WWHHHEEE!!!!!!! Nothing can put me down now! Except for the next chapter...*Sob*
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Post by Firehead on Dec 16, 2005 8:11:22 GMT -5
Hows it coming?
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Lol...