hmgirl
Medium Milk
Fate will lead the way to our lives. Make mistakes and get back up again and you'll be fine.
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Post by hmgirl on Nov 9, 2005 0:59:59 GMT -5
Prologue: Oh noez! Natalie was a 17 year old girl. It was her birthday today. Her life was going steadily. She was a normal girl, someone who liked sports, listened to music and kept up to date in fashion. When she arrived back home from school, she called out, 'Mom! Dad! Where are you?'. No Reply. Suddenly, she heard strange, eery sounds from underground. She was a very hygenic girl, but she, like other girls, always liked to get down to the bottom of things.
Down she went. Down...the sewers. Smelly spiders, ferocious rats everyone. She swam through the sewer waters cautiously. 'Ick! How did I get into this mess so quickly?' she whined. The water was getting quite deep, so she started to get scared. She wasn't used to being in water, not to mention smelly, disgusting, murky water in the sewers. She made it to a pipe.
Suddenly, at the end of that pipe was a bright light that shone as bright as the sun. Something grabbed her around the waist. She shouted. She kicked. She yelled for her life, but to no avail. Minutes later, she arrived in a foreign land where clouds stretched out further than the eye could see. Was she dead? Don't think so. Oh, if only she knew where she was...
Chapter 1: Now what? In chapter 1, expect a bit of exploring and meeting people. Natalie remembers this place from somewhere but can't put her finger on it. She believes she must've been there before because she knows where everything is and who the townspeople are. Could it be? Could she somehow be the mysterious farmer everyone was talking about? Coming soon to this thread you're reading right now! =P Any feedback is appreciated. This is just the prologue, so it's meant to be short.
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Post by Candyapple on Nov 11, 2005 17:32:07 GMT -5
Sounds cool. ^^ I think you should keep going.^^
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Post by Pickle on Nov 17, 2005 11:34:46 GMT -5
Yes, we need more story.
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