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Post by Cheza-chan on Jan 2, 2006 23:36:52 GMT -5
A sunny girl walked into his life and when she left the light went too She worked her days upon a farm She made everything appear anew And then she left. That day- the snow began to fall. He walked to the beach To see the ship's call To see her wave to her friends Acknowledging him most of all. Then she was gone. A blossom in the snow. She would come again but that he did not know. That winter he left. That spring she came. She asked where he was no one was to blame- he missed it all... the last snowfall. She was an old woman now, Sitting under the cherry tree. Still waiting, wishing with her heart mind and soul- waiting to see... if he'd come. For he was the winter and she was the spring that melted his heart and brougt the last snowfall. It's about HM but you gotta think about it a little Edit: fixed that "she farmed and worked upon a farm" line... what the crap was I thinking? -.o;; lol
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Post by pendulous threads on Jan 3, 2006 5:59:41 GMT -5
Aww...that is such a beautiful poem!
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Post by Firehead on Jan 3, 2006 17:04:03 GMT -5
It's good Cheza! I knew it was about HM when I read the "She farmed and worked upon a farm" ^^
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Post by Cheza-chan on Jan 3, 2006 22:33:55 GMT -5
Lol yeah but otherwise it doesn't have much ^^ Thanks guys!
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Post by Pickle on Jan 4, 2006 3:58:38 GMT -5
I think I have an idea...
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Post by Cheza-chan on Jan 4, 2006 22:50:50 GMT -5
What's your idea??
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Post by Kamichama Karin on Feb 18, 2006 11:14:07 GMT -5
yu are a really good poet
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Post by LC on Sept 12, 2006 11:40:39 GMT -5
Thread cleaned
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