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Post by Kikyou Saya Rin-Ren on Oct 22, 2006 3:36:59 GMT -5
*note: I will be referring to myself as Yuna (by the way, this is a trilogy. If people like it, I'll make more Fantasy Realm stories.) Chapter 1-an obsession and a trip I sat on the couch, eyes glued to my blue Nintendo DS. *tap* I dragged some grass from a slot to the character's hands, and pressed X. [flash]Powery: Thank you for rescuing me Yuna! "Yes!" I (in real life) cheered "I finally got Powery!!" As I sat down to start playing again, I heard a faint sound: cuckoo, cuckoo, cuckoo, cuckoo, cuckoo "5 AM?! I gotta... get... to... bed..." I was already absorbed in HM DS for Girls again. "Just... one more Sprite..." After an hour though, I fell asleep, my forehead against the top screen of my DS. There was magic about that night, and if was feeling mischevious. So, it pushed me in. I was now Yuna-the-Claire instaid of just Yuna! Author's note: sorry for the short chapter. The next one will be the very long one, and the last one... I dunno yet.  Please comment! |
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Post by earthgoddess on Oct 29, 2006 13:58:36 GMT -5
nice ^_^
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Post by karenfreak on Nov 5, 2006 4:32:28 GMT -5
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Post by caspis on Nov 14, 2006 22:09:52 GMT -5
5am? Hehheh... sounds like when I started playing Back to Nature. ;D
Is this going to be an Alice in Wonderland-style story?
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Post by Kikyou Saya Rin-Ren on Nov 25, 2006 12:44:47 GMT -5
^Um...
Well, 1st chapter, was her falling in, 2nd will be realization and meeting people, 3rd will be getting out, so maybe. I haven't watched Alice in Wonderland in a looooooooooooooooooooong time, and I've never read it.
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Post by Kikyou Saya Rin-Ren on Nov 25, 2006 13:28:41 GMT -5
oh, when I put something in brackets ([]) it means it's me harvestmoon, not somebody in the story.
Chapter 2-where am I, and why am I here?
I yawned and stretched.
hmmm, I got a surprisingly good night's sleep. [anyone but me notice that sometimes you can go to sleep at anytime and still be at least moderately refreshed?]
"Huh?" I wondered aloud, "My house... it looks... diffrent. Oh! Oh! It must be a dream! Cool. I can do whatever I want."
But as I got up I fell out of bed, and hit my head on the bookshelf. The pain was real. That was when I found out, it wasn't a dream. What was going on I had no idea, but it was definitely strange.
Suddenly, even though I didn't want to, I went to the table and ate a rice ball.
"Yuck! I hate rice!" I tried to spit it out, but I couldn't. I was also surprised I didn't choke, because I'd swallowed it whole. well, time to see what's outside.
I opened the door.
A short, fat man with a mustache far too big, wearing red was standing outside my door.
"You lost your dog ball. Try to be more careful with it next time, hmm?"
"yeah, whatever." I tried to say, but instead I nodded my head and took the ball.
I racedback into the house. "What the heck is going on?! This is... This is..." I couldn't bring myself to say it, but I knew. I was inside my game.
A mischevious grin grew on my face. This would be cool. Much easier to do my farm chores and everything. But... I wouldn't be able to use the use-your-tools-all-around-the-map thing, because I had no use of the top screen or stylus. That would make things harder. But, I loved this game. I could manage. Not only could I, but I WOULD! I smiled as I once again ran out the door. I saw Dr. Trent.
"Hi Dr. Trent!" I pulled out a present I'd had in my rucksack from the day before.
"You know, people's bones are getting weaker, and drinking this helps." He said, as he accepted the milk
I spent the rest of the day having fun. It brought things to a whole new dimmension to actually be talking to them, saying whatever I wanted rather than having acouple of options to choose from.
please comment!
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Post by Kikyou Saya Rin-Ren on Nov 26, 2006 18:40:35 GMT -5
Chapter 3-Get me outta here! After a few days of watering crops and caring for animals, I started to miss my family. "how do oI get outta here?" I wondered aloud. I knew I couldn't tell a character, that might glitch my game, or even worse, freeze it. If it froze... who knows what'd happen to me! But...! Maybe the Harvest Goddess...? So I picked the last of my turnips and grabbed a flower. *** "I hope this works." I gently tossed the flower in, crossing my fingers. "Ta-daaaa! This is the Harvest Goddess! ...Yuna? There's something... odd about you. Something's... diffrent." "Yes... I know." I explained the whole thing. "So, how do I get out?" "We-ell..." She considered my problem. "I think, the magic of me, the Witch Princess, AND all the Harvest Sprites should be just enough to send you back home. You've rescued all of the Harvest Sprites, right?" "Yes... I think so." "Okay, good. Now, you must convince the Witch Princess. I have no reward for her, so it will be hard, as she is very selfish." "Um... Okay." I left and went to my house to go think. I picked up my dog. "Hey Barkie. What do you think I should do, huh boy?" At that moment, I really, really wished dogs could talk. I put him down, walked past Oreo (my cat) and went outside. I could at least talk to her. "Hi." "Yes? I'm kind of busy." "Well, I was wondering..." And so, I had to explain my story again. "...And I think you could help me." "And why should I do that?" "Because..." It thought for a minute. Suddenly I remembered what I was planning to do after I got out, why I was growing poisonous mushroom.s. "...Because, well, don't tell the Harvest Goddess, but I'm planning to put a 100 point Poisonous Mushroom in the Harvest Festival pot next year. I will poison everybody, but now that you know, you won't eat it. "And, you'll be rid of the Harvest Goddess. But, if I don't get home, I won't do it. And if you tell the Harvest Goddess, she won't eat it and you won't be rid of her." I couldn't tell what the Witch Princess was thinking, but she could see she had a way to be rid of everyone. "...Well... I suppose" THE END |
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Post by May on Nov 27, 2006 18:07:16 GMT -5
Awww....It was a really good story! Why did it have to end so soon?? Waaa!
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Post by May on Nov 27, 2006 18:08:26 GMT -5
I would love for that to happen to me. *sigh* Except, if I knew that my family was safe and not sad, I would stay. I would live my life In Harvest Moon.....THAT would be awesome!
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Post by Kikyou Saya Rin-Ren on Nov 27, 2006 18:47:56 GMT -5
Thanks! ^_^ I'm planning to write another trilogy, but right now I'm really overwhelmed with stories I need to finish. My next one will still start with Fantasy Realm: Inside ________ . So keep checking!  |
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Post by May on Nov 28, 2006 16:46:46 GMT -5
Okey dokey! And thanks for checking out my story! You left helpful comments. Thanks!
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Post by Kikyou Saya Rin-Ren on Nov 28, 2006 22:23:38 GMT -5
You're welcome!
Oh, and I'm considering my next trilogy to be Fastasy Realm: Inside a Guinea Pig so it will be in Other Fan-Fictions And Stories.
I'll start another time... When I feel like writing. If you wanna see a boatload of unfinished fics, come see my site. @_@ Those are all the ones I was talking about that need to be finsihed. @_@
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Post by May on Nov 29, 2006 7:06:21 GMT -5
Okey doke! |
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