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Post by mineralgirl on Mar 19, 2006 12:26:47 GMT -5
Yea probably I'll let it off and post one chapter or more a day in spring break. My treat.
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Post by Limegreen Queen on Mar 19, 2006 12:32:37 GMT -5
Zank You!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by mineralgirl on Mar 19, 2006 12:36:30 GMT -5
^^
Oh dang...I have alotta writing to do now .-.
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Post by Limegreen Queen on Mar 19, 2006 12:40:19 GMT -5
Lol! Well it's really good so don't rush!
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Post by mineralgirl on Mar 25, 2006 15:37:53 GMT -5
Summer, day 2
Woe 4---customers
Jill checked her watch. It was 4pm, so Rick would be home soon. Well, Jill thought, This happens all the time now. I'm pretty sure he'll understand.
(At Jill and Rick's house, Rick had just got home.
"KARI! WHERE'S YOUR MOM???"
Kari was playing with the family dog Suruma. She tried to tell her dad where her mom was, but all she could say was "Dada...mama moonhop!"Of course, Rick didn't understand, so he just sat at the table worrying.)
Anyways, on to the story.
"I don't have much customers in this place, so usually I'm all alone here." Kai said sadly.
Jill stared blankly out the window.
"I've always wondered," he continued, "That I might've had more customers if I had had the shack built in that vaccant lot in the town."
Just now, Kai looked up and noticed Jill who was not listening to him. "Hey, is the window more exiting th-"
Jill pointed a shaking finger outside and Kai looked through it. There, he saw a shoking sight that made his jaw drop.
Outside there was a small crowd. They were getting closer and closer with Popuri at the lead.
Popuri opened the door with 5 people behind her. "Well, here we are!" she said.
"Who?" Kai and Jill asked in unsion.
"Customers, of course!"
Uh oh, Jill thought. Looks like Kai will need some help. I better sneak out when he's not lookin-
"Hey Jill!" Kai yelled interuppting her train of thought. "I need a hand here!"
Jill sighed and helped Kai cooked. As the customers went in and out (except for the Gourmet Judge, who was pigging out), she became exhausted.
When the Harvest sprites and Kappa finally left (with an even fatter Van and Gourmet), Kai fell down on a chair. "Whew! That was tiring! Jill, thanks for the help. You can go home now..."
As Jill left, she heard Kai say "Maybe having a little customers is better..."
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Post by Limegreen Queen on Mar 25, 2006 17:30:08 GMT -5
Yeah more! Sorry I didn't respond earlier but I wash busy yesterday and today
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Post by mineralgirl on Mar 26, 2006 17:22:38 GMT -5
^^ Thanks!
Srry, I cant do todays portion cuz i have to go around 3 and my mom took away my journal to who-knows-where.She said that she'll give it back tommorow.
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Post by Limegreen Queen on Mar 26, 2006 18:58:46 GMT -5
Mean mommy! O well I can wait. I'll be really bored though.
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Post by mineralgirl on Mar 27, 2006 16:35:21 GMT -5
Summer, day 3
Woe 5--- Birthdays
Jill woke up, feeling pretty tired but pretty refreshed. She knew something special was happening today, but she couldn't quite remember what it was...
Maybe it was the morning routine... She thought. No...that's not it... but I should get on with the day anyways.
It was when she had gone to the Harvest Goddess spring when it hit her. I mean, it literally hit her. Jill was walking when she had smacked into Popuri. POPURI'S BIRTHDAY!!!!THAT'S WHAT I FORGOT!
"W-wait, Popuri! I have something for you!" Jill stammered. She quickly picked a flower and hurriedly gave it to Popuri. Popuri looked at the gift and smiled.
"Thanks Jill! What a nice gift to get on my birthday!" She said, still smiling. "Since you remembered, you're invited to my birthday party. It's at seven in the inn. Well, see you there!"
Jill sighed. Lemme guess, she thought. It's gonna be a party with lots of drinking, lots of food, and lots of fun...
She walked back home and decided to wait.
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Post by Limegreen Queen on Mar 27, 2006 18:32:48 GMT -5
more more
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Post by mineralgirl on Mar 27, 2006 18:34:58 GMT -5
Sorry it was kinda short...
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Post by Limegreen Queen on Mar 27, 2006 18:41:47 GMT -5
That's k
You're probabaly really busy. Right now our school is doing the state assesments. And having lots of homework. Stewpid Mr.Flannary
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Post by mineralgirl on Mar 27, 2006 18:43:14 GMT -5
 You're actually right. There's not enough free time for me to write. If I do, I tend to plan alot of stuff to do  |
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Post by Limegreen Queen on Mar 27, 2006 18:46:01 GMT -5
I have tons of free time. I just stink at writing. I'm usually on the computer or playing my games though.
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