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Post by karenfreak on Apr 27, 2006 2:16:22 GMT -5
I hope you like my second fanfic, as my first one was not a sucess.  Chapter 1: MineralTown. Every Summer Kai has a visit to Mineral town, well he is the one that Rick always moans about! Shall I tell you why? Do you wanna know? Are you sure you want to know? Well I'll tell you. It's because he's dating his pinkhaired sister, Popuri.  Oh yeah, 1 more thing Jack is dating Popuri too. Anyway, 1 day he came on the 1st of Summer and Popuri was there too greet him. He asked why Rick wasn't there, Popuri went red  and said that Kai had missed a lot this year. "First Rick proposed to Karen and they are married with a pregnant Karen, second Gray proposed to Mary, third Cliff and Ann got married, fourth Doctor proposed to Elli and Elli is now pregnant and..." Popuri stopped herself. " What?" Kai said feeling unhappy... What do you think should happen: 1) Popuri tell Kai that he's married to Jack 2) Kai propose to Popuri and she say no 3) Kai propose to Popuri and she says yes |
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Post by Little Monkey on Apr 27, 2006 12:07:01 GMT -5
i think that Kai should propose to Popuri and she say no
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Post by Jack5 not signed in on Apr 28, 2006 13:33:55 GMT -5
1. Popuri tell Kai that she's married to Jack!
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Post by Limegreen Queen on Apr 29, 2006 12:05:13 GMT -5
I think Popuri should tell Kai that she is married to Jack.
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Post by karenfreak on May 1, 2006 3:43:38 GMT -5
Chapter 2: Popuri's secret
" Well, Kai, A new boy came here and he proposed to me after a while, I'm sorry Kai! Can we still be mates?" Kai started to walk away, "Kai! Kai! Don't leave me here!" Kai jumped back onto the boat and sailed away to an unknown land... called Forget-me-not valley...
Chapter 2 1/2: New greetings.
Muffy was in the blue bar brushing her hair, she was astounded by the way Rock had treated her last year, flirting with her and then proposing to Lumina, well there were no single men left... except Cody but he hadn't talked to her since she had dropped his famous painting in the river, now there was no chance of marrying, unless a handsome yet nice boy fell out of the sky...
"AAH!" Lumina shouted at the beach, " A boy just drifted onto the beach, somone come with a medical kit! NOW!"
Muffy rushed into Griffins bedroom and brang out a mdical kit, she ran to the beach to see a cute boy on the shore. He looked somewhat familier, could she have met him somewhere?
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Post by coolo991 on May 1, 2006 4:52:40 GMT -5
I am Harvest Obsessed, but it won't let me log on! So until I get back I am Harvest Obsessed, I SWEAR
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Post by karenfreak on May 1, 2006 4:54:45 GMT -5
Sorry about the above *cringes* accident
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Post by Herfefiny on May 5, 2006 23:54:39 GMT -5
oooooooooooo...
kewl! i like it!
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 6, 2006 10:51:10 GMT -5
Me too! more please
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Post by karenfreak on May 7, 2006 4:06:20 GMT -5
By the way in the next chapter it will be Popuri again, back in Mineral town,,,
CHapter 3: Confused boy
Kai woke up in a starnge place hoping that everything that had ust happened was a dream. He looked up and saw that he was in an inn. It wasn't like Dougs inn it was more, more colourful. A woman was looking at him he didn't know who she was. She had blonde curls and reminded him of Popuri... Whan he woke up he got out of bed and looked around outside. there was a farm for sale! Kai tought and realised that farm boys were popoular and so he bought it! He was looking around saying hello to everyone when e met a very pretty girl. Her name was celia and she was very good with animals. He went up to her and asked where he could buy cows and seeds. Celia said that he could buy seeds from her and he could buy cows from Takura. she also said that Takura lived in the little house by the farm. Kai missed Popuri and wrote her a letter:
To Popuri/
I am sorry about the weekend but i totally lost myself! I am having a good time in Forget Me Not Valley.
Miss you KaiXXX
Then Kai asked Celia to post it. He just hoped tat it would get there iin time
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Post by Herfefiny on May 7, 2006 12:17:25 GMT -5
In time for what..?  More Please! |
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Post by karenfreak on May 8, 2006 13:37:38 GMT -5
it would get their in time before Popuri never liked him again
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Post by Herfefiny on May 8, 2006 17:41:54 GMT -5
oh right. i knew that!
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 9, 2006 22:21:33 GMT -5
Sure you did!  More please! I like it lots! |
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Post by karenfreak on May 10, 2006 2:06:08 GMT -5
The next chapter will be Celia
Chapter 4: The pregnant woman
After Kai left in the middle of Summer Popuri was upset! But one day she looked in the postbox and there was a letter from Kai! A few weeks later Popuri started too feel strange, she was married to Jack and when she went too the clinic too see what the matter was, when she asked Elli to do a check up she said that she was pregnant! Popuri was dumbfounded, she didn't know what to do, She didn't want to be pregnant just yet!!! She decided not to tell Jack! Yet anyway...
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Oh yeah, 1 more thing Jack is dating Popuri too. Anyway, 1 day he came on the 1st of Summer and Popuri was there too greet him. He asked why Rick wasn't there, Popuri went red 
and said that Kai had missed a lot this year. "First Rick proposed to Karen and they are married with a pregnant Karen, second Gray proposed to Mary, third Cliff and Ann got married, fourth Doctor proposed to Elli and Elli is now pregnant and..." Popuri stopped herself.
More please! I like it lots!