Harvest Moon Unleashed

[karenfreak]

Harvest Moon Unleashed

Chapter 1: Moving to Mineral town.
“ Jack and Jill went up the hill to fetch a bucket of water, jack fell down, but did any of us frown? NO!” Billy said to an upset Jack. Billy was a bully, he is 9 and he always picks on Jack! Jack is only 7 and he doesn’t like it at all. “ Billy!” Billy’s mum shouted sternly at him. “ Time to go now.” Billy laughed at Jack. Later that day Jack’s mum told Jack something. “ Jack, Billy is moving tomorrow!” She said. Jack couldn’t help smiling.

11years later.
“ Happy Birthday!” Everyone shouted at Jack.
“ Thanks everyone, but I have an announcement. I’m moving to Mineral town tomorrow and I’m staying there forever!” That announcement shocked everyone. All of Jacks friends were upset. The next day he boarded on a boat taking him to Mineral town…

When Jack got to Mineral town there was a celebration going on, everyone were joining in except a girl about Jacks age who was just sitting on a log. Suddenly she looked up
“ Jack?” The girl asked. Jack knew that voice but couldn’t get to grips who it was of. “ Jack? I’m Jill. Remember?” She carried on.
“ Jill!!!” Jack said smiling at her friend.

A few years after Billy had left he went to visit his Grandpa in Mineral town. And who was there? Guess? Yep Billy. Billy shouted at Jack even though Jack was ten and Billy was 12. When he was picking on Jack a little girl named Jill came and defended Jack. “ Leave him alone!” She said. Then she looked him in the eye and told him to go away at the moment . Billy ran home and left him alone. “ Hi!” she said to Jack “Hi, I’m Jack.” Jack said.
“ Hiya, I’m Jill and that is Billy.” Jill said. “ He’s horrible to me. He says ‘ Jack and Jill go up the hill to fetch a bottle of water. When Jill fell down did anyone frown? NO!’” She said upset
“ he used to do the exact same to me. Hey. Bye.” Jack said walking away. They played with each other.



( Back to Normal)
“ Jack. Why have you moved here?” Jill asked.
“ Because.” Jack began “ I felt like I needed to see everyone again.”

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Chapter 2: Heartbreaker
Jack went to the festival and a girl started flirting with him.
“ Hiya, handsome.” She was saying “ You’re much cuter than Billy! I’m Eve.”



“ Oh” Jack said uninterested. Then she went to find Jill. He found her. She was looking at this boy adoringly.



“ Hi!” Jill said startled. “ This is my boyfriend Cliff.” She carried on.
“ Oh.” Jack felt as if his heart had been ripped in two. He ran out!
“ Jack! Jack!!!” Jill shouted. What have I done?” Jill asked herself.


Jack ran to his house. There was a knock on the door after half an hour. “ Hiya, Jill.” Jack said.
“ Jill? I’m Ann.” Ann said. Jack opened up the door to see another face he remembered.
“ Ann? Hiya old mate.” Jill and Ann were mates and so Jack played with Ann a bit too.



“ You know, well we were friends weren’t we?” Ann began cringing.
“ Well you know. I was wondering if you wanted to like kind of go out with me?” Ann asked.
“ Okay then.” Jack said happily “ Well I was wondering, now that we’re going out. Will you go to the goddess festival with me?” Jack asked.
“ Yeh, Okay then.” Ann said.

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Chapter 3: Goddess Festival
It was the Goddess Festival, all of the girls looked really pretty, especially Ann… Jack and Jill still hadn’t made up. They were avoiding each other at every cost… Ann and Jill had fallen out too. A few minutes after Jack walked off Jill dumped Cliff and Cliff asked Ann out. Ann had said no. After the dance Ann asked Jack if they wanted to go to the pub. Jack said that he would, as long as him sand Jill stayed as far away as possible! When they got to the pub Ann and Jack ignored Jill totally. The only time he talked to her was when he needed the tomato ketchup. The next day Jack and Ann went to the summit and Jack met Jill with Gray.



So she had been out of Cliff and now Gray to. What a fast worker was she?

[jenrya88]

hey harvest obsessed...
i didn't know you had a fic posted up here!
To tell you the truth... the story's kindda blurry at the moment...
cos it just jumps from one festival to another...

but still... the plot is working really quickly!
and yeah... Jill is a fast worker! hahahaha
who's eve anywayz?

more description and this will be a blast!
love the story... update soon (although i'm not sure how soon i can read it after this... busy x3)

[LC]

It's a nice story, but you could add more detail, it just skips through everything too quickly.

[karenfreak]

Sorry.... But this story just didnt work out... I am starting a new one and could you lock this one for me?

[melody]

Sure thing.
*locks*