the hands of fate

[karenfreak]

Prologue
" Mummy, how did you and daddy get together?" Tommy asked, he was 3 and liked to ask questions.
"Do you want me to tell you?" Asked Annie
" Yes please mummy!" Tommy said giggling
" Ok then here we go!"

( the stuff in brackets are what Tommy says!)

Chapter 1: Boring bits
" Well Tommy I was 15 and I had never had a boyfriend (never?) and well, you know everyone else had (really even aunty Karen?) and I was new to Mineral Town and I didn't know anyone. The day I came my grandpa died (did he? I didn't know that I'd ever even had a great Granddad!)and I was really sad... but then this boy named Kai came to comfort me. (oh that isn't daddy!) and me and him spent the day at the hotsprings (is the hotsprings hot? Annie: yes they are very hot!) and then we dated eachother. A few days later I went to see Popuri and she started shouting at me (Who's Popuri is she your friend?) and moaning that I had stolen her boyfriend and that Kai used to be hers before I came along. I ran out of the door and sprinted home (wow! Did you run fast?). Later Kai came to confort me and then me and him carried on dating. A few years later I found out I was pregnant with your brother Kane! ( Kane? Kai isn't my daddy!) Then when Kai found out he gave me something (a kiss? Did he give you a kiss?) and it turned out to be a blue feather! On our wedding day he told me his real name, Charlie (oh! So he is daddy!) and then I had you and it was happily everly after!"

But it was more than happy ever afteer!

[jenrya88]

great start...
love to read more!

[karenfreak]

Chapter 2: Pregnant or not?
" Annie!!!" Charlie called. " Dinners ready!"
" Ok, ok I am coming." Annie said rushing about getting Kane ready for a party. " I will only be a minute." Then she ran downstairs and let Kane go with his mate. It was a Saturday evening. Charlie was at a party and Tommy was asleep. It would be a nice calm night, or so Charlie thought...
" Annie? You aren't eating very much, are you okay?" asked Charlie.
" Yes, Charlie I have something to tell you! I think that I'm pregnant again..." She replied looking a bit worried.
" Well, honey I think that you should go to the doctors and see...

The next day.
Annie rushed to the inn after she had been to the doctors and sure enough Charlie was there cleaning the dishes. " Charlie! Guess what? I am pregnant..."
" Are you, that's wonderful!!!"
" Pregnant again?" Ann asked coming through the door. " My Joey is enough for me. He is only 9 but already acts like a teenager!"
" Oh, yeah. Well how did the party go last night? Was Kane acting good?" Annie asked laughing.
" Oh, yes he was as good as gold." Ann said.
" Oh good." Charlie laughed. " Anyway it's 3. I have got to go now. Say hi to Cliff for me!" Then Charlie walked out of the door and hung up his apron.

[karenfreak]

Chapter 3: Love already?
Kane ran home from school. " MUM!" Kane shouted.
" Yes? What honey?" Annie asked from the kitchen.
" Ann told me that you're pregnant. Are you?"
" Yes, honey I am pregnant."
" Can I have a sleepover next week for my 11th birthday party?"
" Yes, who do you want to invite?"
" Can I invite Joey and John and Ryan?"
" Yes you can. Why not Kieron? Have you falled out with him?"
" Yes, he is horrible."
" Oh, dear."
Then Kane went upstairs to write invites for the party. When it was time for Tommy to be picked up by his childminder there was some funny news. " Mum! There is this new girl and she is 5! She kept on calling me stupid and she is being mean."
" Oh dear... I'll pick you up tomorrow and have a word with her mum or dad.

The next day
Annie knocked on the childminders door and asked if Kayleigh was still there. She said that she was and then Annie asked if she could have a word with the parent. A girl with shocking pink hair and a tarty dress came in.
" Popuri? So you finally gave up on Charie and met someone else?" Annie said horribly
" Who is Charlie?" Popuri asked.
" Kai!" Annie replied bluntly.
" Oh. Yes I gave up on Kai and I found a new husband."
" Really?"
" Yes and I had this little replica of me!"
Annie looked at the little girl. She looked just like a younger version of Popuri.
" MUMMY!! THAT HORRIBLE LITTLE BOY IGNORED ME WHEH I CALLED HIM STUPID!!" She wailed.
" Don't worry darling. He's just upset because he's stupid!" Popuri muttered looking at Tommy spitefully.
" He's your kid isn't he? He looks just like a little Kai and he's got your eyes." Popuri said spitefully.
" Come on Tommy... Lets go..." Annie said dragging Tommy out of the door.
" But mummy... I haven't got my stuff!"

[Kikyou Saya Rin-Ren]

it's funny! I like it and please continue!

[Love is like a Flower]

this is a relly funny story
i cant wait for the next chapter!

[Herfefiny]

This is funny! I really like this story so far, it's good!

[karenfreak]

Chapyer 4: Spiteful people

"Tommy, when you have had an argument it is normal to leave you coat, lunchbox, snack, my bag with only lipstick in and other stuff somewhere else." Annie said
" But, why?" asked Tommy.
" Just... because." Annie said.
" Oh." Tommy said and then he went to his bedroom to draw.

When Charlie got home she told him about Popuri and her little girl. Charlie listened the whole time. Then he laughed at the end. " What's so funny?" Kane asked waliing downstairs.
" Oh... nothing." Charlie said stopping suddenly.
" Oh, okay." Kane then walked into the kitchen.
The next day Annie went to the hospital and got a scan. There was some news. " You will be having twins..." Elli said. After that Ann went to the square, there was a notice that said:

NOTICE:
THERE WILL BE A NEW BOY AND HE WILL BE MOVING TO MINERAL TOWN. HIS NAME IS TOBIAS AND HE IS SINGLE. HE IS LOOKING FOR A PARTNER AND HE IS 26. THERE WILL BE A WELCOMING PARTY ON SEPTEMBER 1ST. FROM THE MAYOR.

A new person? Annie didn't care. She was married, if they flirted with her she would get him packing.

When Annie got home she told charlie and he walked out and didnt come back until 12:00am when they had an arguement. Then he left her. Annie lay down on the sofa and cried.... and cried.... and cried...

[Love is like a Flower]

i wonder what will happen next

[Herfefiny]

He left her after one argument? sheesh...

[coolo991]

They couldve had an arguement before...

[Kikyou Saya Rin-Ren]

Still, I wonder why he left her?

[Deniz :]]]]

Kai or charlie is stupid he does not relize how good he has it and she is spouse to be havin 2 kids O_0 go with the new guy annie

[karenfreak]

Chapter 5: The party and affairs
Annie woke up on September 1st and got herself ready. Then she rushed to the party. " Hi." This really cute and sexy boy said to Annie "I am Tobias and I hope you enjoy the party." He carried on. Why was Tobias there? He wasn't supposed to arrive until later. " Why are you here?" asked Annie
" Oh, i got an earlier boat and I arrived about 20 minutes ago" He said smiling at Annie. Annie thought that she would like Tobias. Then Charlie appeared out of the blue. " Oh, by the way, here are the divorce papers." Charlie said handing Annie the paper. " As you're an item with Toby I guess that I should tell you my news." Her? An item with Tobias. She would like that but was sure that he wasn't interested. " What news?" asked Annie.
" OH, the news about as soon as we have our divorce I'm marrying Popuri." Charlie said.
" POPURI??" asked Annie outraged " You want to marry that tart??"
" Yes, her. We've been having an affair for ages but I could never tell you." Charlie said. " That little girl of Popuri's is mine, all mine!!" Charlie announced.
" Are you okay?" Asked Tobias.
" Yes, I'm okay..." She admitted " But I have to tell you something..."
" What?" asked Tobias
" I'm pregnant with twins but he doesn't wanna know. He only wanted two kids and now we'll have 4."
" Oh, Don't worry Annie"
" Well, Tobias, are you still single?"
" I am indeed"
" Well, will you go out with me??"

[Herfefiny]

*GASP*

Charlie is a cow. How mean of him!