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Post by Ksirb on Dec 28, 2006 21:39:55 GMT -5
;D I understand... Also more time can mean good ideas ^_^... *goes all demony* SO IT BETTER BE GOOD! >.<... Just kidding XD I know it will be good! XD
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 28, 2006 23:00:33 GMT -5
LOL. There's a demon in the corner...sorry I just got your made up song stuck in my head Mia!
Take your time Mel. Whatever you type will be good!
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Post by Mel on Dec 28, 2006 23:05:15 GMT -5
Anna... did you ever read Don't Love Me? (random, sorry)
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 28, 2006 23:17:47 GMT -5
Umm...no? Where is it? Who's it by? *Glances around*
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Post by Deniz :]]] on Dec 29, 2006 15:02:04 GMT -5
*sniffles* T _T ( ok theres the reaction you wanted to hear ) damn Mel it is a great story and so sad man it is so so sad
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Post by Mel on Dec 29, 2006 19:16:27 GMT -5
Umm...no? Where is it? Who's it by? *Glances around*  It's really long, though... more than 50 chapters. But, I can send it to you by email, ok? *snýffles* T _T ( ok theres the reactýon you wanted to hear ) damn mel ýt ýs a great story and so sad man ýt ýs so so sad There's something wrong with your keyboard, the "i"s are weird.  Thanks, Deniz |
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Post by Kikyou Saya Rin-Ren on Dec 29, 2006 20:47:23 GMT -5
Sorry for the wait, guys. I just haven't felt like writing right now. ... *shot*  I only write when I want to, it makes my writing better and easier to do. I'll have more up soon.  I understand! I don't know about anyone else, but when people nag me to write, it makes it even worse. Anyway, as I was saying, don't worry, it'll pass. |
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Post by Deniz :]]] on Dec 30, 2006 6:05:02 GMT -5
Umm...no? Where is it? Who's it by? *Glances around* It's really long, though... more than 50 chapters. But, I can send it to you by email, ok? *snýffles* T _T ( ok theres the reactýon you wanted to hear ) damn mel ýt ýs a great story and so sad man ýt ýs so so sad There's something wrong with your keyboard, the "i"s are weird. Thanks, Deniz yes i'm aware of that it wasn't my keyboard though it was my cousins ( she's german / turkish) so that is how the keyboard i's are there XD |
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Post by blueislandssecret on Dec 30, 2006 8:41:15 GMT -5
WOW!  How do you write like that, you are such a deep writer, so much like a professional! I love this story!!! I repeat: "Did you ever think about being a writer?! I KNOW your books would become best sellers, and I promise I'd be one of your no.1 readers!" Can you help me with my fanfic, I'm having a b ut of a writers block...  My fanfic's: A Way with Destiny", if you have any ideas with the next chapters, can you please tell me. I really need your help!!! |
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Post by Mel on Dec 30, 2006 12:40:33 GMT -5
WOW! How do you write like that, you are such a deep writer, so much like a professional! I love this story!!! I repeat: "Did you ever think about being a writer?! I KNOW your books would become best sellers, and I promise I'd be one of your no.1 readers!" Can you help me with my fanfic, I'm having a b ut of a writers block... My fanfic's: A Way with Destiny", if you have any ideas with the next chapters, can you please tell me. I really need your help!!! Wow, thank you... That was really nice of you. I'm going to be busy today, but I'll be sure to read your story soon, and PM you with some help, ok? I'll be glad to help. |
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Post by blueislandssecret on Dec 31, 2006 0:30:00 GMT -5
Your welcome, and I really mean it!!! If you do consider writing books, they WILL become best sellers!!! I JUST LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS STORY!!!  Thanks, I'll wait for your PM!!! |
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Post by blueislandssecret on Dec 31, 2006 0:33:44 GMT -5
PS: Who's Mia???
In your sig.?
(I'm just curious.)
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Post by Kikyou Saya Rin-Ren on Dec 31, 2006 4:41:56 GMT -5
^Mia=*magical*
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Post by May on Dec 31, 2006 12:36:48 GMT -5
A to the W to the E- Ugghhh, this is taking too long! Okey doke, well, its SUPPOSED to spell AWESOME!!! How can you write like this!?! Oh...My....Gosh...It A-mazes me!
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Post by Mel on Dec 31, 2006 15:12:23 GMT -5
Thanks, everyone.
Sorry that I made you guys wait so long..
I've been busy.
Special thanks to Akane for giving me an idea so I don't die of writer's block. lolChapter Six- Letters She had promised... A single fist crashed into the coffee table. His whole body was shaking, but he didn't know whether from anger or sadness. The room felt cold and unforgiving as he sat by the coffee table. His eyes traveled the walls, trying to find something that would get his mind off of tonight. His attempts, however, were useless. He woke up to a comforting voice and found Valerie's eyes looking down at him. Jack raised himself from the bed he had made in the hospital waiting room and looked up at her with anticipating eyes. " ...well?"
She stood there, wringing her hands. Jack could see that the news weren't good. As he stared at her fretting hands, he felt like he was falling. She didn't have to speak to let him know what had happened.
"She's.... dead... isn't she?" he was finally able to choke out. Eyes were on him from the other people in the waiting room. He wanted them to stop staring. They didn't know the kind of pain he was going through. He wanted to scream at them. He covered his face to get rid of the people around him.Jack shook his head quickly. Don't think about that. Don't you ever think about that. He got up and walked to the bedroom. He flicked on the light to his room, and it lit up the same way as that night so long ago: the night where he felt like no one would ever understand him. He had been a teenager then, about to go into high school. The simple act of turning on the light was bringing back these depressing memories. Jack tried to avoid another flashback, and sat heavily onto his bed. Laying down, he kicked his boots off. One of them hit a wooden box at the foot of the bed and made a hollow noise. He looked up to see what it had hit. His stomach turned over when he saw Sarah's treasure box. He had given it to her on her 20th birthday so she could keep special treasures in it. Even though his mind was telling him not to, Jack had to look into the box. It would be painful to see his loved one's prized possessions, but it might help take the pain away. He would feel closer to her. Closer than he could at this point. Opening the box, the smell of potpourri rose up to him. Breathing in, he suddenly felt more relaxed. Many papers were piled in this box, their corners crinkled and some so old that he was surprised they were still in one piece. He picked up a sheet of pink-tinted paper, and he could see it was a page from a diary. The words "I have a boyfriend!" were scribbled in loopy letters. The words were written in flowing cursive and each dotted "i" had a small heart in the place of the dot. Jack smiled as he read about their first date. He remembered that day clearly as he read about each event that had happened. It wasn't the most romantic date when he had knocked over a glass of water, but to both of them, it was very special. Half-way through reading her diary entry, the page turned blurry as Jack tried to read with glistening eyes. "Oh, Sarah.." He placed the page carefully on the floor and continued looking. Jack found an older-looking piece of paper that was under a box of chocolates. Jack opened it slowly, and he could see that where it was folded, there was a dark line from the crease. It was a letter written to Sarah. For a fleeting second, Jack's face flushed. Was this by another man? He read through it hastily, but as he did, the anger was replaced with wonder. My dear Sarah,
How are you? I've seen better days, myself. The whole farm is alive and well, of course, just like you saw it before. I can't believe it's been so long since you visited my humble home. Please consider coming again. The small puppy that you had so much fun with is now strong and loyal. You should've seen the cows when you left. I could see how they missed you. Those cows enjoyed your company, Sarah.
I hope you get this letter soon. I told the mayor that I wanted it sent to the city immediately, but he had told me the ferries always took so long with sending letters.
You know where I live! Mineral Town. Just in case you had forgotten. It's been a while, you know..
By the way, I'm not getting any younger, so I was hoping that you would find someone that could take this farm and keep it going? It would mean the world to me. I know that you're really busy and all, so don't worry about it.
Take care,
SamJack's heart beat so hard that he thought he could hear it. He could barely see as he looked for more things in the treasure box. Another letter that looked like this one was right under it, and he opened it quickly. Hey Sam,
You know, I was thinking about it, and I know someone named Jack who would love to see this farm. I'm sure he would die for an opportunity like this one. He's always loved plants and such, so why not give him a shot? I'd love to bring him to you sometime in March, if you don't mind.
SarahTurning the letter over, Jack looked at the date that was written in small letters at the top. It was marked November 21. Jack stared at the date with wide eyes. She had planned on sending this letter tomorrow.
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