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Post by Pickle on Oct 26, 2008 0:52:56 GMT -5
Do you want me to, like, fix this?
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Post by Rozewater on Oct 28, 2008 23:38:14 GMT -5
There seems to be some funny characters in the story that makes it hard to read. Sorry...I fail terribly at writing but it's still fun.  I don't think Jux was insulting your writing style, exactly. Just saying that the funny little boxes and such after bits of dialog is a bit distracting. =/ |
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Post by butterflyflutterby on Nov 11, 2008 19:26:40 GMT -5
Do you want me to, like, fix this? Sure, if you want to. |
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Post by butterflyflutterby on Nov 11, 2008 19:33:29 GMT -5
There seems to be some funny characters in the story that makes it hard to read. Sorry...I fail terribly at writing but it's still fun. I don't think Jux was insulting your writing style, exactly. Just saying that the funny little boxes and such after bits of dialog is a bit distracting. =/ Yeah I didn't think he was insulting me I was just telling a little about my talent |
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Post by Pickle on Dec 19, 2008 0:14:52 GMT -5
Alright, edited the 3 chapter. Sorry it took so long.
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Post by butterflyflutterby on May 1, 2009 19:48:19 GMT -5
Ah! Um thanks! It's been forever since I logged on cuz I felt so bad about what I did (sorry about that guys!) Anyway thanks for your time and effort! Your so nice. |
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Post by Pickle on May 2, 2009 20:24:56 GMT -5
Yes, yes we are.
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