Twilight hm style

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Everyone loved the Davinci family they were the most charming people though they didn't talk to anyone they were just naturally beautiful
there was something strange about them and ViVi (witch princess from animal march) wanted to find out what hi vivi oh hi lock (hero) um i was wondering if we can go hang out sometime no lock im busy ,busy with what, the usual, what is the usual, its my stuff i do lock now just pllease go,
why should i everytime i ask to go with u somewhere u say stuff like im busy and blahblah, well maybe i am busy, fine it really seems u hate me im just moving on right now im just gonna go do stuff with shelia, fine
Lock couldnt tell but vivi was really hurt she wanted to do stuff with him she just never had time Now he was mad at her and vivi knew that shelia was by far way prettier than her but lock had picked vivi for her personality now she had ruied it with him

Vivi had heard of mysterious deaths around the city like phoebe had died and calvin when they were in the woods together everyone kept saying they were animals that did it but that wasnt the truth the next day she found lock sitting near a tree carving something in it vivi knew it was probably something personal so she waited for him to leave after he left she ran over to the tree and found the carvings of v+l= <3

vivi loved it she ran up to lock and gave him a really big kiss on the lips lock blushed so hard that he looked like the tomato he was holding then he took out the blue feather and proposed of course vivi said yes

the next day was the wedding the maid of honor was Kathy and the best man was the wizard 3 seasons later vivi had a baby and named it grace
everybody loved baby grace she was as sweet as pie she loved everyon then 3 more seasons later vivi had joseph a baby boy it semed he was mystical everywhere he walke girls would melt

[Pickle]

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