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Post by tootsieroll on Jun 5, 2009 22:39:07 GMT -5
This calls for HIATUS (before the 3rd chapter starts???)
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Post by Pickle on Jun 6, 2009 16:40:07 GMT -5
Well, now I have to go cry.
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Post by tootsieroll on Jun 9, 2009 5:38:52 GMT -5
sorry. i have school u know and it's really hard to try to make a fic with a lot of brothers around to laugh at you. really sorry pickle. it will continue on our sem break and stop... and continue on in christmas or anytime i can. just check military ranch when there's a new post to see the announcements or possibly a very long new chapter
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Post by tootsieroll on Jul 26, 2009 21:27:12 GMT -5
Chapter 3 ~Captain's Sad Beginnings cad... A big joke. I fail as a husband, a father, and a captain" the captain bows his head and bawls "I always liked you, Kevin. Your perserverence and how you treat your mates. It's just that Tico's father is the captain of all of the Li'l League. I hafta follow his orders and promote and pamper Tico or else i'll get fired!" "Really? Well that's a cheat but Tico's still beter than me. I mean he beat's me in EVERYTHING. So isn't that fair? Don't worry cap'n it's 'kay if you slobber me and stuff. I don't want you to lose your job" Kevin looked at Captain with shining eyes. "Why Kevin!!! You're even better than Tico's father. Why Timothy's a cheat too. Used his money to get up higher ranks. Darn it, Kevin! I ain't better than you" Captain smiled a genuine smile for the first time "You can actually take my place. Well let's get back to camp, mate. Let's go and act some more. When you beat Tico in some contest or whatnots, I'll promote you. You better be sure of that!!! Think of your title 'Ltnt. Kevin' , eh?. Come, my son" Captain got up and tucked the picture and flower in his backpack. He lead Kevin back to camp. When they past through the wire, Captain's face immediately became angry(-looking  ) and he started to shout at the noisy soldiers. "GET BACK TO YOUR TENTS AND REST, YOU NITTWITS!!!!" Captain screamed (with no help of a megaphone) Kevin just smiled and slowly walked towards his tent. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~If you didn't see the connection of cad and buttermilk, let me remind you that I modified chapter 2. Now it's longer. Next chapter may come later as in like next week or saturday... but don't worry!!! Recipe for the Heart will update like on saturday. I'm up and ready to go again so my fics'll update. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Post by tootsieroll on Sept 23, 2009 4:10:03 GMT -5
Chapter 4
~I See You...
"Yo Kevin" Piette waved her hand in front of Kevin's eyes "You alive? Breakfast's ready"
"What's for breakfast?" Kevin yawned.
"Let's see... Slop, slop, and more slop. Now get up and put on your uniform" Piette helped Kevin up.
"... So what's the point???" Tico and a large group were chatting "Well well well. What do we have here? Aw.... how sweet of you two. The first couple in kiddie camp history"
"Whatev, Tico. You're just a stupid bully. Geez, you're just so popular because you daddy the head of this dumb operation. Look around you, Tico. All of us are working hard but you just depend on your mommy and daddy to become wittle mister popular. Kevin was thrown away here and I bet his parents won't bother to come back. He's got more guts than all of you put together!" Piette raged on.
"Idiot!? Why I'll tell you to my... dad... dy..." Tico's voice became softer and softer
"See? Now just go eat your baby formula, Tico" Piette dragged Kevin to the lunch line.
"Idiot!!! Loser!!!! I'll show them who's the loser. I'm going to train. That's right, with no one to help me. Let's see who's the loser now when everyone sees me so muscular tomorrow. They'll see." Tico dressed up in his uniform and went out of his camp in about midnight.
"Kevin!!! Faster faster! You can do better than that" Tico spotted Captain at the training grounds coaching Kevin "Beat that pea-brain Tico! Go go!!!"
"Pea-brain? Wooh, wait til father hears this" Tico whispered to himself.
"Good enough, Captain?" Kevin came into view. He was jogging all around the place and climbing over obstacles. He finally beat Tico's record.
"Good? That was nothing!! Let's see if you can beat mine!" Captain continued to coach Kevin.
"What??? Oh well. Looks like my plans are ruined" Tico sighed "But still, I have a captain to fire" Tico sneaked back to the camp and finally slept in peace.
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Post by Pickle on Sept 23, 2009 23:24:35 GMT -5
Why did you make chapter 4 seperate? It's a really short chapter.
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Post by tootsieroll on Oct 9, 2009 1:30:30 GMT -5
actually, i'm just kinda lazy and I had to do something else so I had to turn off my comp. I'll finsh it right now *modifys chapter 4*
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Post by ruthienick on Sept 2, 2010 0:34:14 GMT -5
It's tootsieroll here! Yeah, i accidentaly deleted my old account. ANyway. I haven't been posting like for a long time so I'll be rewriting this. I'll post it on fanfiction.net or something. Recipe of the Heart will also be rewritten but I have to change the title cuz i just saw this uber cute comic at smackjeeves that had the same name. Yeah, my style kinda socked so i'll have the same story but a change in events. thanks!
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Post by Pickle on Oct 7, 2010 12:59:58 GMT -5
...How does one accidently delete an account?
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Post by Mage the Observer on Oct 7, 2010 19:19:27 GMT -5
That 'Delete Account' button is fairly close to the 'Save Changes' button when one's messing with their settings. An absent-minded individual could hit the wrong one by mistake, and press 'Yes' before they knew what the hell they were doing.
With any luck, that won't be me. Still, I could see it happening...
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) and he started to shout at the noisy soldiers.
