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Post by Mars1040 on Dec 26, 2005 18:36:02 GMT -5
Other Chapters: Chapter 2Chapter 3Chapter 4Chapter 5The Wishing Star - A Friends of Mineral Town/More Friends of Mineral Town/A Wonderful Life/Another Wonderful Life Crossover Chapter 1: The Letter and the Feather …I recently came to the Forget-Me-Not Valley, it was only a month ago. I sent a letter to her, not even a note. I’m so lonely here, please come, -MelissaJack took off his blue hat and fanned himself with it. “This must be the hottest day of the year” he told himself, he put his hat back on and looked in the mailbox, there was only one letter, it was from his cousin, Robert. Jack read the letter and sighed “I’m glad Jill is going to the Forget-me-Not Valley. In the Forget-me-Not Valley, Melissa was trying to write a song. “NO! NO! NO!!!” she yelled as she crumpled up the paper she was writing on. “Is there anything wrong?” A voice said Melissa was startled, she turned around and Gustafa was there “Gustafa, don’t do that!” she told him. “I’m sorry,” He apologized “What are you doing?” “I’m trying to make up a song,” She explained “I’ll help,” Gustafa said, he played a few notes on his guitar, Melissa got inspired “When you wish on a star,” she sang, she wrote the words down as she sang, Gustafa played a few more notes “You really could go far,” Melissa sang. As Gustafa played, Melissa sang and wrote down the words. Rock, who was hiding behind a tree, was watching Gustafa and Melissa, he was enraged with jealously. “Oh…why can’t Melissa like me?” he asked himself, he slumped to the ground. Then Rock got an idea “’If you wish on a star’ That’s it! I’ll make a wish on the wising star” he exclaimed, “Then, Melissa will like me!” Meanwhile, in Mineral Town, Jack was on the farm, he searched in the tool box, then, he came across a blue feather. “I know this,” Jack told himself, “It’s the feather Jill used to propose to Rick!” he remembered when Jill proposed to Rick. I remember that day, like it was yesterday, Jack thought It was on the beach. Jill and Rick walked out onto the dock,
“Rick, can I ask you a question?” Jill asked
“Sure,” Rick answered
Jill took out the feather “Will you marry me?” she asked
Rick was surprised by this, “I…YES!”Jack tucked the feather away and took out some seeds and went outside. |
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Post by Pickle on Dec 27, 2005 0:02:59 GMT -5
Okay, hold on!
So, do the characters share a farm or something?
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 27, 2005 8:27:13 GMT -5
Wow...thats a lot of mixes between towns and stuff. So...Jack lives on the farm in Mineral Town, Jill lives with Rick, and Melissa lives in Forget-Me-Not Valley? Okay...well once you explain that part to me I will get it.
The story...excellent. I like it a lot so far. It's just like Rock to be jealous of another guy getting a girl he has his eye on. ^_^ I hope to hear more.
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Post by Mars1040 on Dec 27, 2005 12:32:12 GMT -5
Okay, let me explain this, Robert is Jack from A Wondeful Life but currently he lives in a different town, Melissa is the girl you play as in Another Wondeful Life and they're both siblings. Jill is Jack's sister who is married to Rick, but she comes by the farm to help Jack with his chores.
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 27, 2005 16:55:48 GMT -5
So...all three if them are siblings? Melissa lives in Forget-Me-Not Valley, Robert lives in Mineral Town on the farm, and Jill lives in Mineral Town with Rick?
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Post by Mars1040 on Dec 27, 2005 17:05:53 GMT -5
I guess I forgot something, Jack lives in Mineral Town and Robert lives in an unknown town. Sorry if it was unclear
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 27, 2005 18:39:38 GMT -5
Oh...okay I think I got it now. Wait...let me re-check. Sorry,I'm very slow at picking things up...huh...
Jack: Lives on the farm in Mineral Town
Robert: Lives in an unknown town
Jill: Lives with Rick
Melissa: Lives on the farm in Forget-Me-Not Valley
And then they are all siblings? Am I right? I hope so...
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Post by Mars1040 on Dec 27, 2005 19:23:10 GMT -5
You're half-right, Jill and Jack are siblings and Robert and Melissa are siblings, Jill and Jack are Robert and Melissa's cousins
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 27, 2005 19:24:51 GMT -5
Okay...I understand now. Now that I fully understand...I WANT MORE! Lol...are you almost done with the next chapter?
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Post by Mars1040 on Dec 27, 2005 19:26:50 GMT -5
yes, just finishing up the last paragraphs,
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 27, 2005 19:29:05 GMT -5
Oh, awesome...I can't wait. I'm starting on a new one...even though I shouldn't. I already have 4 going at the same time. -_-' Well...anyways...I can't wait for more!
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Post by Mars1040 on Dec 27, 2005 19:30:25 GMT -5
The Wishing Star
Chapter 2: Jill’s Visit
Melissa decided to return to the farm. She checked on the cow, the crops, and her dog, Growle. Soon, she was bored, soon, she fell asleep.
Melissa dreamt that she was on a stage in front of thousands of people. Then, the music started. “Far beneath the hazy borders of my heart,” she sang, “I can see a place, it’s something like this, every now and then I don’t know what to do, still I know that I, can never go back, all the things I’ve seen, in those hazy dreams, can’t compare to what I seen tonight, everything’s so different, that it brings me to my kn-” she felt wetness and she woke up.
Growle was standing over her, panting. “Growle!” Melissa groaned. She sat up and picked up the floppy-eared dog. “I only have one wish,” she told Growle “Other than working on the farm, I want to sing in front of a lot of people! I guess that’ll never…wait! The wishing star! The star right above the moon!” Rock was listening to what Melissa was saying.
Meanwhile, Jill and Rick were walking to the Forget-Me-Not Valley. Jill was holding a chicken in her hands and Rick was holding a basket filled with eggs.
“Jill, tell me, why are you bringing one of your chickens to your cousin?” Rick asked
“My cousin doesn’t have a chicken” Jill started “And Torchic doesn’t get along with any of the other chickens”
“She doesn’t?” Rick exclaimed
“Nope,” Jill said “But meeting someone new will give her a second chance!”
Rick smiled “You really know your chickens” he told her. Jill smiled too.
Back in the Forget-Me-Not Valley, Melissa decided to pick some flowers. The picked a few toyflowers, suddenly she got caught up in a song “And oh, I know the world of Real Emotion has surrounded me,” She sang “I won’t give into it, now, I know, that world is the only way my heart can go, I hear your voice calling out to me, you’ll never be alone!”
Then Melissa heard clapping and the one who was clapping, was Rock “Bravo, Bravo!” he said
“Oh, Hi Rock” She greeted him,
“That was great!” he exclaimed “Have you ever considered yourself for a singing career?”
“No,” Melissa answered “I just want to stay in one place, but, I do want to sing in front of a lot of people!”
“Really,” Rock said “Well, I have to go, bye Melissa!” he walked off and Melissa bit her lower lip. “MELISSA!” A voice yelled, Melissa turned around and coming into the valley was her cousin, Jill and her husband, Rick.
Later, on the farm, Melissa had been showing Jill and Rick around. Jill and Rick decided to stay at the inn for the night. “Great!” Melissa responded to that ‘I can point out to you the wishing star!”
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 27, 2005 19:38:23 GMT -5
Oh, nice chapter! The bad part is...as soon as I get involved with a story...I won't stop bothering you for more. ^_^ This was a good chapter. Hope to hear more soon!
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Post by Mars1040 on Dec 27, 2005 19:40:28 GMT -5
I'll get started on Chpater 3!
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Post by pendulous threads on Dec 27, 2005 19:47:56 GMT -5
^_^ Cool. Now the problem is that I have to wait...huh...well I better go. I think my grandma wants me to get off the computer...write, write, write! I must hear more! ^_^
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