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Post by Noffie on May 14, 2006 20:51:35 GMT -5
This is my first fanfic please dont tell me the negatives instead be positive and kind (Unless u REALLY disagree) Chapter 1 "Newspaper" On a crisp Autumn day Jill woke up to find her husband (Gray) packing up bags "Gray!?!?" she exclaimed "What on earth do you think you are doing??"She looked over and tryed to see what he was packing for Gray Continued to pack his Bag ignoring Jill like he always did Jill was not fun to listen to she put people to sleep with her nagging, whining, begging and such nonsense "What are you doing?" Jill calmly asked him this time "Huh? oh good morning Tsuki!" Gray happily Chimed as he continued wearing shoes IN the house Jill just payed for THAT!. *ahem*Jill got out of bed and went through his bag that might be easy to tell where he was going not like he would bring a winter coat to the Bahamas . there were: - T-shirts
- Shorts
- a camera
- beer (xD)
- an extra hat
"T-shirts! But Gray its Autumn!" Jill nagged as she went through his bag "Not where I am going!" Gray happily answered "where are you going then?" Jill said as she tapped her foot and stared hard down at Gray what kind of place is warm right now?? "an Island! With the guys we need a break!" Gray continued to pack "What island?" Jill asked curious he could be going anywhere including Hawaii Jill loved Hawaii and begged Gray to take her there before she was pregnant "some new island" Gray replied as he threw the newspaper Toward Jill Jill stared hard at the newspaper New Summery Island! it said... hmmmmmmmmmm Jill thought hard about this Should I let him go?? Jill watched Gray pack his bag and Jill knew that Gray worked all the time even on weekends for Saibara "well..." Jill was pretty sure she knew what to tell him "Ok...Just be back soon" "Soon?" Gray was not sure about this the island was no where close to mineral town it was far away. "Rick says it takes a Week to get there" Gray called little Nikkou (their Child) over to tell her the news "Daddy is going to go for a while for fun so you be good and play with the puppy!" Nikkou answered quickly "NOO!" and hit Gray on the nose with a toy she was playing with before he had to call her over and make her crawl ALL the way across the room "Da..Da no go stay wif Nikkou!" Nikkou attempted to talk TO BE CONTINUED...
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Post by karenfreak on May 15, 2006 1:28:33 GMT -5
oh, it's good
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Post by Herfefiny on May 15, 2006 17:10:43 GMT -5
How cute! Its good! ;D please continue!
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 15, 2006 17:18:27 GMT -5
That's cute,Lily!!
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Post by Noffie on May 15, 2006 19:42:09 GMT -5
O thanx I'll continue
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 15, 2006 19:51:57 GMT -5
YEAH!! U ROCK!!
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Post by Herfefiny on May 15, 2006 20:02:23 GMT -5
YAY! XD
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Post by Noffie on May 15, 2006 20:08:37 GMT -5
Chapter 2 "Toddling Toddler" On The Day Gray was leaving Nikkou woke up early and climbed out of bed she did not want to wake her parents up they would never let her leave the house, Nikkou reached up to the door nob "D-a-Rat!" she could not reach the door nob! she crawled over to the puppy "Pou-ppy!! W-a-ke up!" The Dumb dog just layed there why does ma even like da pouppy? Outside Nikkou heard Rick trying to wake everyone up "Hellooo? Its me Rick is Gray ready yet? ? We have to leave in 3 hours" Nikkou had a great idea she would keep Gray from leaving "noo-noo Da no heree!" "Nikkou??" Rick had no time for fun he had to get Gray "Nikkou wake your Daddy up! Pleaaase!!!! i mean Purdy Please?" "Huh? Nikkou get away from the Door!" Gray was annoyed Nikkou knew she was not supposed to go anywhere near the door it could open and squish her little fingers!! "GRAY?!?!? HEllo??? are you in there???" Rick was very impatient and knew gray got up early... Usually "Oops gotta go! Bye Nikkou bye Jill!" Gray said grabbing his bag and Running over toward the door "oops I forgot my hat!Be back next month!" then he ran back grabbed his hat and left poor little Nikkou Daddyless for a whole MONTH! "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO da coome Ba-eack! Nikkou Want Da!!!" Nikkou bursted into tears and ran over to Jill "Ma? Da coome back Todey? Purdy Peas?" Jill smiled at her child "sorry Nikkou Daddy will come back on your Birthday he promised!" Jill picked up Nikkou and put her back in bed "Da eat Caeke? Da like Chocoolate get Da Chocoolate Caeke?" Nikkou said as she slowly fell into a deep and daddyless (XD) sleep TO BE CONTINUED.......
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 15, 2006 20:10:53 GMT -5
A daddyless sleep? lol. That was cute.
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Post by Noffie on May 15, 2006 20:12:28 GMT -5
Without Daddy she is incomplete XD
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 15, 2006 20:22:00 GMT -5
Cuteness! XD
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Post by Herfefiny on May 15, 2006 22:58:23 GMT -5
How adorable! What a cute story! XD
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Post by Noffie on May 16, 2006 19:01:31 GMT -5
Chapter 3 "Arriving To The Island" Gray was standing on the ship with the wind in his hai aahhh it feels so good at sea then he heard footsteps Someone else up so early? Gray turned around hoping to see one of the guys but there was nothing there... I know I heard someone they were behind me... Gray looked around no one else awake? hmmmm thats odd"Hello? Hello? Doc? Rick? Cliff? Kai? Anyone? " no answer... Gray walked over to Cliff's cabin to wake him up "Cliff! Wake up!" he shook Cliff side to side "Cliff!" now Gray was angry who is such a heavy sleeper?!?Gray went over to Rick's cabin "RICK!!" this time he was yelling "Rick come on wake up!" Gray pinched Rick on the side "OW! aww come on Dude thats not cool.." Rick rubbed the spot that Gray pinched "so why did you wake me up?" Rick was tired so he did not want to have anything to do with Gray this early "Someone was behind me then I turned around and....There was no one there!!!!!!" Gray snatched the blankets off Rick and threw them to the side "I heard them they were behind me" "ooooh really you heard the captain wow Very interesting!" Rick said pulling the blankets back "and cows will fall from the sky? wow you need rest" "NO REALLY!!!" Gray yelled BOOM!! "what was that???" Rick ran over toward the door and shut it "oooh no the other guys!!!" Rick ran out to the rescue "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!" "what is it? ?" Gray ran out to see what happened TO BE CONTINUED.....
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Post by Limegreen Queen on May 16, 2006 20:28:07 GMT -5
Is it cows?? XD. This is getting interesting. . .
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Post by Noffie on May 18, 2006 18:23:33 GMT -5
Cows...? XD
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