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Post by Candyapple on Jul 22, 2005 18:16:56 GMT -5
This is a fanfic about Karen in Flower Bud village. Karen as the main charatcer of course. Please read and tell me what you think!
My Stupid Life- A tale of Karen in Flower Bud
Chapter 1- The Beginning
I stormed furiously out the front door of the vineyard house. Slamming the door very hard on my way out, I winced in pain as I did. It was quickly opened again though by my drunk and screaming father.
“What the hell is wrong with you!? Get back here now young lady!” he screamed angrily in a slow, drunk way.
I kept running, tears pouring down my pale, bloody cheeks. How could he be so cruel? Ignoring my seriously injured arm I kept running towards the beach. I always went there when I was angry, which was quite often. It seemed to calm me down. I was still crying and holding my bloody arm. My head was pounding and I felt like I was going to die. I didn’t care though. I got to the beach and sat down in the warm sand.
“Why don’t I just die? Nobody cares about me anyway!” I thought out loud between sobs.
“I care about you… Don’t I count? .” Said a soft, comforting voice. I always loved to hear it. It belonged to Kai, the young, vineyard worker from the city. He was very handsome; he had soft, tan skin, dark, brown eyes, a tan vest, black boots and shorts, and a purple bandana over his dark, brown hair. Yup, Kai was my boyfriend, and I couldn’t ask for a better one.
I slowly stopped crying as he put his arm around my shoulder comforting me. It was then he realized just how bad my condition was. He gasped and ran his soft hands down my broken, cut and bloody arm.
“My God Karen! We need to get you help!” He said panicking.
“For Gods sake it’s just my arm!” But I was losing blood, fast.
He quickly took off his shirt and ripped it into thin stripes. Then he firmly wrapped them around my injured arm. I winced as he did but I knew it would help so I didn’t complain. I struggled to get away as he picked me up, but he was stronger than me so I gave up with a deep sigh. And with that he started running to the mid-wife’s house, being careful not to injure my arm more than it already was. My vision started to quickly get blurry and my head started to spin. Then everything went black.
End of chapter
Please tell me what you think!
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Post by Balto on Jul 22, 2005 21:44:59 GMT -5
I like it! Keep it going!
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Post by Candyapple on Jul 22, 2005 21:49:59 GMT -5
thanks Balto! ;D *huggles* then i'll continue writing sometime tommorrow. i g2g get to bed soon.
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Post by moko on Jul 22, 2005 22:58:50 GMT -5
hmm...........
seems good, but i never liked the how some people say that gotz beat karen...........
having kai be her boyfriend is cool..............
but i have a sinking feeling that jack will steal her from him..............
*glares at jack*
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Post by Candyapple on Jul 22, 2005 23:10:24 GMT -5
thanks. ;D i just dont really like Gotz... nice guess.  we'll see... |
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Post by Ember on Jul 23, 2005 8:54:37 GMT -5
Too much blood for my liking but it is very good!
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Post by Entegy on Jul 23, 2005 12:23:26 GMT -5
To me, Gotz in HM64 always seemed to be the type that would be you senseless if it wasn't rated E.
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Post by Candyapple on Jul 23, 2005 14:01:17 GMT -5
Thanks guys! To me, Gotz in HM64 always seemed to be the type that would be you senseless if it wasn't rated E. lol ya. dont worry Ember, thats about the only blood you'll see in this fanfic. i think. |
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Post by Candyapple on Jul 23, 2005 15:53:21 GMT -5
Chapter 2- A new girl?
I slowly and groggily opened my sore eyes. My head was still pounding and my arm hurt quite a bit. I groaned deeply and loudly as I slowly sat up and realized I was on the floor in a dark blue sleeping bag at the Mid-Wife’s house. I looked around and saw the Mid-Wife sitting in front of her desk writing something on a piece of paper. She turned around and smiled.
“So you’re awake eh? G’morning then.” She said in a comforting voice. I had always liked the Mid-Wife, ever since I was a little girl. She was very kind to me.
“Why am I here?” I asked a little confused.
“Kai told me it probably wasn’t a good idea to take you back home… He wanted to stay here but I wouldn’t let him.” She explained softly, her few wrinkles on her face showing as she smiled at me.
After she said that everything from the day before started coming back to me. I sighed as I softly rubbed my sore head with my arm that wasn’t broken. “ I have a headache…” I mumbled quietly in pain.
“You had a concussion, that’s why you passed out yesterday on the way here.”
“Oh…”
Quickly changing the subject she exclaimed smiling, “So did you hear? There’s a new girl moving here in a few days, she says she’s going to take over the old man’s farm.”
I burst out laughing when she said that. When I was done, I smirked. “Really? Well good luck to her with that.” I said sarcastically.
“Yes… I should like to see how that turns out.”
“So can I leave yet?”
“If you wish.”
“Ok I will.” I slowly got up and quickly grabbed hold of the wooden table beside me because I was a little dizzy. I softly rubbed my sore and pounding head again and tried to balance myself as I stumbled over to the door.
“Be careful on your way home.” The Mid-Wife said kindly.
“I will.” I replied with a sweet smile. And with that I walked with a little difficulty out the door and into the cool, spring breeze outside. I wondered about that new girl coming to run the broken down farm as I walked along the brick pathway to the winery.
End of Chapter
Feedback is greatly appriciated!
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Post by Entegy on Jul 23, 2005 18:01:46 GMT -5
Girl?
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Post by Balto on Jul 23, 2005 19:01:02 GMT -5
Awesome!
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Post by Candyapple on Jul 23, 2005 19:52:54 GMT -5
Thanks guys! Yup, you heard me, it's a girl. |
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Post by moko on Jul 23, 2005 21:07:53 GMT -5
hmm....................
if it's a girl, then maybe the girl will steal kai from karen..............
*glares at girl*
unless karen and the girl end up gay and go out together; then the girl would be stealing karen from kai..................
*still glares at girl*
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Post by Candyapple on Jul 23, 2005 21:14:28 GMT -5
lol moko. We'll see. |
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Post by Balto on Jul 23, 2005 23:30:38 GMT -5
hmm.................... if it's a girl, then maybe the girl will steal kai from karen.............. *glares at girl* unless karen and the girl end up gay and go out together; then the girl would be stealing karen from kai.................. *still glares at girl* Three emotions:  , XD and @_@ |
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we'll see...
, XD and @_@