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Post by Emily on Feb 11, 2006 18:25:33 GMT -5
Here is one of my fics ! My Disability-and my Love. Ch. 1-Sharks Apparently swimming very, very, very far out in the sea was NOT a good idea. I paddled my arms faster, trying to avoid the shark biting me again. My left arm was already bitten, blood was pouring from it, and I knew other sharks would come, but I tried not to think about that. Suddenly I saw a beach in the distance. I smiled slightly, but from my mouth came a scream of pain. Other sharks had come, and one had bitten my other arm. I reached the beach after a painful minute, and the sharks swam off. I staggered across the beach, and I walked across a square of rosy-red pavement. I needed help-fast. I hurried. I fell to my knees, and I cried. I would probably die. My vision started blurring. Then someone ran at me. I couldn’t see him; all I saw of him was a swirl of dark and light brown. He cried out, and then he picked me up. He was strong, considering the way he picked me up. I fainted and thought no more.
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Post by pendulous threads on Feb 11, 2006 20:05:21 GMT -5
<3 Good as usual. Like I said on HM4girls, I love it.
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Post by Emily on Feb 11, 2006 20:10:32 GMT -5
Yeah-Who wouldn't love a story with Cliff in in it? *grins* Did you ever finish it? Anyway 3 chapters... Ch.2- Meeting Cliff
I suddenly realized I wasn’t dead. I opened my eyes and saw two people, a girl and the boy, standing by me. I sat up. I was in a strange bed, a strange place, and here were two strangers?!? I reached back to scratch my back, but I couldn’t. The boy laughed. “Need help?” He did it for me. I tried to stretch out my arms out, but I couldn’t. “What happened to my arms?!” I shrieked. The boy’s face became sorrowful. “Your arms,” he said. “When you walked, somehow you got infected. So the Doc …um… removed your arms…” “WHAT!!!” I screamed. “Calm down!” the girl cried, finally speaking, and helping me out of bed. “Take her to the inn.” She shot at the boy. He nodded. He beckoned to me, and he ushered me out. “I’m Cliff.” Cliff said, looking at the ground as we walked. “I’m Nicole. Call me Nikki.” I said. He looked at me and smiled. I blushed. Cliff led me to a building and up some stairs. “This is my room,” he said, opening the door. “Can I sleep here?” I asked. He smiled slyly. “OK.” He shoved me in and locked it behind me. I beat the door with my shoulder. It unlocked and I ran down the stairs. I saw Cliff run out the door. I giggled and playfully ran out to get him.
Ch. 3-Ann I came out. Some thing struck me, and I fell back behind the trees. I laughed when I saw Cliff on top of me. He laughed too and helped me up. He brushed us off and we walked into the inn together. There stood a girl. She had long orange hair and ice-blue eyes that stared hard and cold at me. “Cliff, who’s this? She asked, not removing her stare. “Ann, this is Nicole; Nikki, this is Ann.” Cliff introduced us. I smiled at her. She didn’t smile back. “Ok, good night.” Ann said to Cliff. “Good night Cliff.” I said. “Good night Nikki.” He gripped my shoulder and smiled. Cliff didn’t say anything to Ann. She seemed furious. He went outside and I went up to bed, but I couldn’t stop thinking about those cold, hard eyes…
Ch. 4- Talk I woke up as there was a knock at my door. It opened and there stood Ann. “Hi.” She said. “Can we talk?” She took me to a mountain, where we laid down on the grass. She asked me about my arms. “Hey-is Cliff your boyfriend?” She asked. “No, we’re just really good friends.” I said, puzzled. “Oh-OK” Ann said. “Me too. I even have a crush on him.” “Yeah- totally crush material.” I said, agreeing. “I’m hoping…” She lowered her voice. “Cliff will ask me out.” “Me too.” I said. We giggled, and that’s the day we became friends. I looked at her. Her eyes had melted-they were warm and friendly. Yet still there was something about them...
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Post by pendulous threads on Feb 11, 2006 20:19:36 GMT -5
Yeah, I finished it. but I love Cliffie so much, I'm going to read it again. ^_^ Great job!
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Post by Emily on Feb 11, 2006 21:25:09 GMT -5
Thnaks >_< Is any else actully gonna read it?
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Post by pendulous threads on Feb 11, 2006 21:39:40 GMT -5
I hope they do. But, the FanFiction section has been less active. But, you have to understand that not all people could read this yet.
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Post by Emily on Feb 11, 2006 21:44:33 GMT -5
I know. *drops head* I'll wait. I can't come on Sunday, so maybe then.
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Post by pendulous threads on Feb 12, 2006 0:29:24 GMT -5
YAY! Cliff! ^-^ <_< *stares at Anna* uh....I can't explain. Yeah, it's really good so far! *Whistles* I think we're both falling for the wrong people...I must have Cliff and you must have Gray. Or better yet, we could share.
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Post by pendulous threads on Feb 12, 2006 0:30:42 GMT -5
Okay then! Emily, you can share with us too! It is your story after all...
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Post by Emily on Feb 13, 2006 20:30:39 GMT -5
Ok. Ooh, this is a really short story. Ch. 5- Date It was noon the next morning when there was another knock. This time it was Cliff. “Um… Nikki?” he asked. “Yes?” I asked. “I was, um…” he broke off, and then grabbed my shoulder. “Come on.” He said. I nodded. We walked. “Can I, um, take you to lunch?” he asked, blushing very hard. “Sure.” I was blushing equally hard. “Let’s go to Kai’s place.” He said. I looked questionably at him. “Oh, you’ll see.” He said, laughing. We went to the beach, and he led me to a shack. We walked in. A boy with a purple bandanna around his head looked up from behind a counter. “Date, Cliff?” he grinned. “Nikki, this is Kai.” Cliff said, smiling. “Nice to meet you.” I said. “We’ll have 2 spaghettis and a snow cone please.” Cliff said. Kai nodded and handed us food. We sat down at a table. We ate our spaghetti and finished quickly. Cliff held for me the snow cone. “Thanks.” I said happily. I started licking it when I noticed Cliff’s face was right in front of mine. “What?” I scooted back. “Nothing.” he said. “Can we share the snow cone?” He asked. “Yeah.” I laughed, realizing what it was. We ate the snow cone together. It was the best time for me. I felt loved.
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Post by pendulous threads on Feb 13, 2006 21:16:59 GMT -5
<3 Me like. Me love. <3
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Post by Emily on Feb 13, 2006 23:48:26 GMT -5
Thanks guys. Yeah, this story only has sixteen chapters.
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Post by pendulous threads on Feb 15, 2006 6:17:09 GMT -5
But it's still good. ;D
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Post by Emily on Feb 16, 2006 18:47:01 GMT -5
Ch. 6- Hate The next morning, I came down from waking up. There sat 5 girls together. I recognized 2 of them-Ann and the girl from the strange place. The others I didn’t- a girl with long, brown hair, a weird girl with pink hair, and a girl with long black hair and glasses. “Hi.” I said to all of them. No one answered. “Oh hi, Nikki.” Ann said, not looking at me. “Elli, Karen, Popuri, Mary.” “What’s the matter?” I asked them. “Matter? MATTER?!” Karen screamed. “I’ll tell you what the matter is! You little freak, you’re stealing Ann’s boyfriend! Next you’ll be stealing her life!” Ann nodded and looked hard at me. “How?” I cried. “Oh, drawing Cliff to yourself, even though he likes her!” Popuri yelled. “How do you have proof?” I asked. “I have proof!” Karen said. “I was on my way to Zach’s when I looked in the window of Kai’s place, and saw you two sharing a snow cone!” I gasped. Karen and Ann smirked. “Yeah you bitch, feel my pain.” Ann said. “Besides, you’re just a freak, no arms, look at that.” Karen added. All the girls but Mary laughed at me. I started crying. I had no friends, I was a freak and a bitch with no arms, and I hated myself. I couldn’t do anything by myself now! I stared at the girls with their beautiful arms and I cried harder. I ran upstairs. All the girls-except Mary- grinned at each other, happy that I felt bad.
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Post by Emily on Feb 16, 2006 19:01:28 GMT -5
I can write better, I'm just taking this from another site. Thank you again! Bad Ann!*slaps* And Karen!*slaps* And Popuri!*slaps* And Elli! *slaps* But good Mary! *hugs Mary* Yeah! Mean girls...
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