The Broken Hearts

[vanillakisses39]

Very cute, please continue!

[Herfefiny]

Next chapter! Yay! ;D

Chapter nine: Summer love?

Summer was coming to an end, and fall was right around the corner. Blue thought it would be the perfect time to ask Ann out. Blue had had a crush on Ann ever since he came to Flower Bud Village. She was so nice and cute… Blue never had the courage to ask her out until now…

As he was heading to the Junk Shop, He saw someone at her door. It was Jack. Blue crouched behind a bush to see what was happening. Ann answered the door and smiled. “Ready?” asked Jack. Ann nodded. “You look great.” Jack complimented her. Ann giggled, and they started heading toward the square. Blue sighed. He should’ve known. Why hadn’t he asked her out earlier? Blue threw the bouquet of flowers he had away, and started heading for home. Just then, Eve ran past him, crying. Did she just enjoy running and crying, or did he always catch her in the act?


Blue glanced toward the square, where she had fled from, and saw Ann slap Jack. Blue laughed to himself. “Breaking up already?” he thought. He decided to go home. He wasn’t in the mood to talk to Jack or Ann, or anyone.

When Blue was almost to Duck Bridge, he heard some girl crying. It was Eve. Suddenly, she looked up at him. She glared. “Do you enjoy my pain like everyone else in this village?” Eve asked stiffly. “What are you talking about?” Blue asked, a bit taken aback. “Oh what would you know!” Eve shouted at him. “Hey, I didn’t do anything!” Blue shot back. “And I bet I do know something!” “What?!” Blue stared at Eve blankly. Maybe he didn’t know anything… “Well, I just saw Ann going out with Jack…” Blue said. “You liked Ann?” Eve gasped. “I did…”Blue looked down sadly. Why was he telling Eve any of this stuff anyway? She probably didn’t care…

“Well,” said Eve, “I liked Jack. But now I know he’s just a no good, cheating, evil farmer!” She sniffed. Blue looked up. He hated seeing girls cry. He never knew what to say, and it always seemed so awkward... “I had trusted him! And what did he do? He stabbed me in the back! I cant believe him!” Eve looked up at Blue. “Sorry about this.” She said. “You probably don’t want to hear what I have to say....” Blue shook his head. “No! I don’t mind at all.” He smiled thoughtfully and said: “I’m glad to know I’m not the only one with relationship problems...” Eve giggled. “Thanks Blue, and sorry for getting mad at you earlier.” she said. Then she looked at him seriously. “I can trust you, right?” Blue looked back at her. Their eyes met. “Yeah,” he replied. “You can trust me.”

[Limegreen Queen]

More please!!! I love it!

[Herfefiny]

Sorry, I have to go! I'll try to write more on....Tuesday.

[Butterscotch]

This is really cute ^^
I laughed out loud at the "did she just enjoy running and crying?" line.

[Limegreen Queen]

That was pretty funny. I can't wait till Tuesday then!

[karenfreak]

I can't wait til Tuesday!!!

[Herfefiny]

I'm so happy that people like it!!!! ;D Thats so awesome!

[Limegreen Queen]

One more day!

[Herfefiny]

Hi! I'm hlad everyone likes my story! ;D I hope you guys like this next chapter!

Chapter ten: Run away

Eve woke up to the morning sun streaming in her window. “What a beautiful day!” she thought to herself. Then she frowned. This kind of mood wasn’t her! She thought of Blue. He must have put her in a better mood then she had thought. Eve frowned again. If she started liking Blue, he would probably just stab her in the back like all the other boys. But they could be friends right? Couldn’t she trust her friends? Eve thoughts were interrupted when she heard the front door open. She snuck out of her bedroom, and looked downstairs. Alex, the doctor, was inside talking to Duke. Eve snuck downstairs to eavesdrop on them.

“...Yes, I guess all we can do is hope he gets better.” said her Uncle sadly. “I can check on him again if you’d like.” said Alex. Duke nodded and they walked into the back room. “What's going on?” Eve thought. Suddenly, an awful thought struck her mind. Her grandfather, Terry! That must have been who her Uncle and Alex were talking about! Eve followed them to the back room and saw that she was correct. Terry lay on the bed, sleeping but Eve knew it was bad. He had some rare kind of cancer, and Eve hadn’t thought about it much since now. Could it be getting worse...? Eve felt the tears burn her eyes, and she ran out of the house, still in her pajamas. Eve ran and ran. She didn’t want to talk to anyone. She wanted to run far away. She wanted to leave this town, this world! Why was everything going wrong? Why was everything bad happening to her? Eve started sobbing as she ran when she came to a stop at a huge mountain. She looked up. Could she climb it? Eve thought it would be very peaceful at the top so she started climbing.

Eve was extremely close to her grandfather. She always had so much in common with him. They were both quiet and shy. Eve had always admired Terry. He was brave to walk around the forest protecting animals. But Eve could remember him coming home late, and cold. He got sick a lot, but Eve never thought it was ever that serious...

Eve climbed up the mountain, sniffing as she remembered being with him... When Eve finally got to the top of the mountain, she suddenly felt a sharp pain in her foot. She angrily cussed, and looked down she had stepped on a rock that had cut through her sock and into her foot. She tied the ribbon in her hair around her foot, but she knew it wouldn’t do much. She crawled into a near by cave, still holding her foot, and slowly fell asleep...

[Limegreen Queen]

I like it! More please! I'm glad you really did put a chapter in today!!!!!! Hopefully there is more tomorrow!

[Herfefiny]

Here is the next chapter! I hope you enjoy!

Chapter eleven: Search

Blue walked along the path that led to the bar. He was in the mood to talk to Eve. He had wanted to be with her ever since last night. But he had to work, and now was his chance to just sit and chat.

When Blue got to the door of the bar, it was locked. “It isn’t closed today...what’s going on?” Blue thought. He knocked on the door. Nothing. He knocked again, louder this time. Blue heard foot steps. A sad and tired looking Duke answered the door. At first, Blue didn’t know what to say. Then he found the right words. “Umm...Is-is Eve there?” he asked quietly. Duke shook his head. “She ran away...” he said sadly. “Ran away? When?” Blue asked, shocked. “This morning...she wasn’t in bed when I went to get her....” Duke shook his head sadly. Blue blinked tears away. He knew that Eve was all the man had, after his wife had died a few years ago, and his own daughter had left. Suddenly, Blue stood up straighter. “I’ll find her.” He said bravely. Duke looked up. “Thank you.” he said. The door closed and Blue was left alone, a blank look on his face. He could tell Duke hadn’t believed him, but Blue was determined to find Eve.

After looking by the river, pond, beach, and every where else Blue could think of, he considered giving up. Where would he find Eve? Suddenly a thought came into his mind. He hadn’t checked mother hill! It was such a peaceful place, and Blue could remember going there when his favorite cow died. Blue set into a jog, and before he knew it, he was running faster then ever before. When he stopped at the mountain, he started climbing. When he finally made it to the top, he ran toward a cave, determined to see Eve there. Sure enough, he did. She was sprawled out on the ground and a ribbon was tied around her foot. Blue shook her urgently. She didn’t stir. He shook her again, harder now. “Eve?” he said. “Eve! EVE!” He shook her desperately. Why wouldn’t she wake up? He could feel his heart pounding in his chest. He was afraid to check her pulse. He didn’t want to find out. He felt tears run down his cheeks. Why was he crying? He barely knew her. He wiped his eyes. What was he going to do? Blue’s first thought was to take Eve to the clinic, but how would he get her down the mountain? Blue didn’t know what to do, and he felt a knot forming in the pit of his stomach. He was getting scared. Now he shook Eve violently crying her name loudly. Suddenly, her eyes fluttered open, and she looked around. “Blue?” she whispered. Eve tried sitting up, but soon fell back down with the pain. “What hurts?” he whispered back. It seemed like a magical moment, and if either one of them spoke loudly, it would shatter. Eve blinked and looked into Blue’s deep eyes. But he looked away. “What hurts?” he asked again. “Everything.” She replied quietly. “Can you walk? We need to get you to the clinic.” Blue said urgently. Eve nodded, and she stood up with help. “Come on.” Blue said. They managed to get down the mountain, and Blue carried Eve the rest of the way, running fast. After a while Eve fell asleep in his arms, but Blue didn’t notice until he finally got to the clinic.

Blue thumped on the door with his foot. “Alex? Alex!” he called. “It must be late...” Blue thought. The door finally opened, and a tired looking Alex opened the door. When he saw Eve, he gasped. “What has happened?” he asked. Suddenly, Blue felt very tired. He tried to stay awake but he felt like he was holding to much. He couldn’t go on. Blue fell to the ground under Eve’s weight...

[Limegreen Queen]

You meanie! You left a blue hanger! that's not fair! I like it still! This has become one of my favorite stories!

[Herfefiny]

I know I should have warned you. XD lol
YOu really think it's that good? Wow! At first I thought people wouldnt like ot, but now I'm happy! ;D

[Limegreen Queen]

PSSSSST! Check ur pms! Yes i love it! Do u get y i called it a blue hanger instead of a cliff hanger?