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Post by May on Jan 10, 2007 15:57:23 GMT -5
Thank you so much for commenting Raika and harvestmoon!
Chapter 21 (Woot woot!*Applause*)-
Lines of confusion gathered on Claire's petit forhead. Who was it?
"Who are you?" Claire asked in a soft, kind voice.
"Who are YOU?"
"Kai."
"One single name, all it is is one single name" Kai replied.
Claire now recignized his voice.
"But it's your name," Claire continued.
"Yep."
"Kai, maybe you weren't meant for me, I'm sorry."
"No Claire, YOU weren't meant for ME," Kai added.
"Well-" Claire started, but didn't finish, so she could think.
After a minute or two of only the sound of feet shoving dirt and crickets singing, Claire spoke.
"You came back...for me."
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STUPID SHORT CHAPTERS!!!! GRRRRR I HATE YOU!!!! AGGGHHHH!!!!
*Sniff* *Sniffffff* I'm sorry
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Post by May on Jan 10, 2007 15:58:50 GMT -5
Gosh! After I read that chapter, that is wayyyyyy too short.....I'm really sorry
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Post by May on Jan 11, 2007 18:12:05 GMT -5
Okey doke. Well, I think I'm just gunna ditch this FanFic cuz no one likes it anymore so....I'll give it one chance- If I don't have a comment by tomorrow, I'm stopping
I know it sounds harsh, but people are commenting on everyone's but mine...so, that may be my cue
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Post by Raika on Jan 14, 2007 14:09:45 GMT -5
No please don't ditch it.  It's a good story, really. Sometimes you just have to be patient with other people who read your story and love it, but they just don't have time to comment.  |
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Post by May on Jan 16, 2007 20:02:29 GMT -5
Thanks  Ya, maybe I'll just wait a little while... Writing, I guess is not my thing |
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Post by May on Jan 21, 2007 13:44:35 GMT -5
Defintily not...seeing as I doubt I'll get any comments....(That's a cue)
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Post by May on Jan 21, 2007 13:45:09 GMT -5
I quit
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Post by Raika on Jan 27, 2007 15:34:03 GMT -5
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Post by earthgoddess on Jan 28, 2007 0:06:24 GMT -5
no, please, don't quit...I love your fanfic so much! I haven't had much time to comment but your fanfic is so awesome!!
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Post by Pickle on Jan 30, 2007 12:23:31 GMT -5
Weee!
It's cute.
Cute stories are...cute!
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Post by May on Jan 31, 2007 17:16:12 GMT -5
lol thanks, maybe i'll re-think it
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